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| Vplasgirl 2008-03-09 ch 1,  | abuseHow did I miss this excellent and realistic portrayal of how-they-got-together? I'm not normally a fan of important moments being narrated or revealed in flashback as the beginning of this story does, but it seemed to work in this case. Off to read more by you... |
| anonymous01 2006-07-30 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful sequel. A bit of a too/to mixup somewhere in the middle, but nothing detracting from the story. |
| stareagle 2006-07-30 ch 1, | abuseSweet... I am glad you followed up on Broken. I hope you will add another chapter or two building on the conversation and fluff to follow this opening. I like the way you write. Thank you |
| ayesha-s 2006-07-30 ch 1, | abuseaww perfect!! |
| sweet-surrender5 2006-07-30 ch 1, | abuseuber cute, as usual ;). lol now go make another grissom self aruguement fic cuz they crack me up:P |