I absolutely cracked up when Dorothy tells Roger to hug himself in a corner.
I love were you've taken this story, so please keep updating. I was so sad when i got to chapter seven.

(Just a Suggestion >v

Good GOD! Love the story so far... please please update soon!!

-Zephyr

Should've of could've of would've.

This story is good and it has an actual plot and everthying. These stories are far and few.

Check out some of my Big O stories in the meantime.

Keep up the awesome work!

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Well, things are moving along nicely, although it does seem that both of them may have to do some soul searching here, or perhaps get an outside perspective on things.

Awesome chapter. I loved the argument lol. Update soon! Peace.

It's good to see a new chapter up. I am enjoying reading how Dorothy is going through the expereince of living life anew, or at least in a different way than she is used to and having to adjust the best that she can. That arguement was simply hilarious.

Oh, I might suggest that you get a speel-checker or a beta, though. Not to be mean, but you did seem to have a few more typoes than normal in this chapter.

Great story, I am looking forward to reading the next chapter.

I'm glad Dorothy understands love. That has to be the greatest feeling in the world. Update soon! Peace.

Beatifully written... Thank you so much!

Nice chapter. It sure was interesting seeing what everyone else thought of the relationship between Dorothy and Roger. Also, it is always a treat seeing Roger being knocked off balance and desperately trying to re-gain his equilibrium. That was a nice touch of Dorothy entering his study and surprising him like that, althgough I must admit, I too am curious in the direction of Roger's observation.

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I'm waiting for Chapter five. *waits*

yay you updated :]

I am really enjoying the conversations between Roger and Dorothy in regards to their budding relationship in that little "dance around the truth but let slip the truth way" that they have. I can't wait to read more!