Story/Characters: 7.5/10. I like the story idea, though this one and the other just seem very, very similar.

Creativity: 7.75/10. The story doesn't feel like every other on this site, though the other fic is recycled from this one (or visa versa?).

Writing: 9/10. Very well written. The writing is the real appeal, here. You use description very well.

Believability: 8.5/10. The events feel very real and believable.

Overall: 8.25/10. A well written, emotional fic, but I feel as if I've read it twice now.

Thank you for sending me the email about this story. It is just as good as Innocence. I agree with you I really hope this isn't the ending. Good jod again!

you made me tear up. mainley because that is the ending that i both expect and fear. it was a beautiful story and so honest. snaps for you!

I like your attention to details, but why the sad endings? Keep up the good writing!

this is great!! I love it even though the end made me feel so sad but with out the end or a different it wouldn't be the same. By the way did you ever check out my incomplete profile. i mentioned you! write more hp fics, but could you please make some with happy endings.

Poor Ginny. Great job. For a moment, I actually thought he was going to live and they were going to have mini Harrys and mini Ginnys. Guess I was wrong.