a chapter is never to long unless it's bad.

This has some promise..

I'm still liking this!

Oh, my dear stars and garters! I love this.

i like it so far and hope to see more soon

i like it

This is a really good soon

interesting story. i like it. if it wouldn't be too much to ask, could you possible make the chap.'s longer? i think it would make it better

Good chapter, but I did notice quite a bit of mistakes, but that's okay. We all get typos. I think before you submit the chapter, that you should look over it for misktakes. Anyways, I loved this chapter and the scene between Jeannie and Logan. You really got in depth with their personaliities. Good idea about Scooter and Jean having a kid. Update soon.

I like this. I have an OC that is the daughter of Yuriko and Logan. Roxie is cool. Just to let you know, Logan's real name is James. It's up to you if you wanna use or not. Anyways, great job and update soon.

Cool. Roxie i know is your own creation. But David is i guess Logans other name. Any way intresting.