excellent chapter as usual, can't wait to see what they have to go through next, please update very soon.

hi this is kosh17 didn't want to give ya an extra hit and log on.
Very exciting chpt.Played out in my mind like the tv show. some mistakes made me read a sentance over a few times, but i got the gist of it. Just letting you know i'm still here and reading.

O, I love it! I love Jean on crack! and Bobby getting his ass kicked. But then again... I'm not too big of a Bobby fan. I dug the holdup thing too. It's good that you're doing one where everything isn't fine; more people ought to write like that. Did I mention I love Jean on crack?

very interesting story, kinda has a days of future past feel to it, please update very soon.

What a chapter. I want to read more, hope that you do more.

Wow, this is one hell of a story.

I'm not one to give flames, so don't worry about that.

I like the idea. Like Kosh17, you could downplay the drug trafficking. I'm not so into that idea. Actually, when I read, it made me shiver. But I do like the post-Apocolyptic setting, and the scattering of the Brotherhood and X-Men to New York. I look forward to reading some more of this, so update soon. Oh, and make sure to go into detail. I love detail!

The general idea seemes good. The large influence on narcotics traficing is, although probaly more realistic, not, in my oppion, a good idea and should be droped. Is it possiable you could subtitute it for another iligal ocupation lke theft?
But I probaly would be intrested in it other wise. Don't let me discourage you by thinking i represent everyone on the site. Furthermore i have a firm belife that the site should be for you to write your story the way you want it not just to be a private author for me.
in summary, you should realy get into detail about the events mentioned here, that would be a very good read and i look for stories that contain such. Drop the drug dealing and youve got yourself a moraly grounded, apocolypitic and very intresting story.
What ever your choice more power to you.
I will watch for further developments.