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Reviews For: A Demented Romance Story
razzkat 2006-11-17 . chapter 2
I love it! Mewtwo is always so depressing, it's great. This is hilarious; please update it?
razzkat 2006-11-17 . chapter 1
Wow, that was great! I thought it was really funny; especially the Quasimodo part, and their kids. :) Great job! Makes me wish I had included Mewtwo in Strange and Twisted Love Affair.
dude from europe 2006-09-12 . chapter 2
UPDATE OR DIE
Sk8terJulz 2006-09-08 . chapter 1
Wow, this is really funny! Keep it up...is there going to be a weird paring with Link or Zelda? Because then... I can't imagine it. Oh well, keep up with it. Marth is such an idiot.
crystalicios 2006-09-08 . chapter 2
Ridley and Samus are teh perfect match.

And Yoshi as they're son... Aww...

Watch as a dog... OMG I ACCUSE J00 OF READING TEH BOXCAR CHILDREN!

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Umm... That is all...
Calderious 2006-09-08 . chapter 2
This is hilarious! Please keep writing! This really is a VERY good parody, and some of the lines made me laugh. Update soon please!
Reptile Army 2006-08-28 . chapter 1
do more mewtwo romance stories there is not that many out there :)
Valoofle 2006-08-09 . chapter 1
It was unpredictable, but I like that kind of thing, so hey, there you go. I definitely liked the little Marth songs, especially the whole new world song, and you spelled "diarrhea" so wrong it hurt, but the random ness of the story was worth it. I commend you.
Tealfrog26 2006-08-01 . chapter 1
You're right, you did warn me about this...now my eyes have burned inside out...

Yes, that's how good this story was.

Tho underage drinking should not be let go without a warning. Pikachu, don't let me catch you drinking again!

Yea so, hilarious, good job.
Final Authority 2006-07-31 . chapter 1
Demented is awesome.

Weird babies are awesome.

Random love songs are awesome.

... Good work.
bijoukaiba 2006-07-31 . chapter 1
LMAO, I was giggling at the end with Pikachu and Pichu.
"Stupid kid, stop brawling and have a beer,"

Nurse Bowser made me think of Gaylord Focker (Meet the Parents, Meet the Fockers)

And the funny part with visiting Samus and Ridley made me laugh.

The only thing I didn't like was having Marth play the idiot. I realize you said not to take this seriously, so some of his comments did make me laugh. But as a Marth fan, I did feel slightly disappointed at his role.

((If you wanted to get on more people's nerves, you should have done Roy instead. ;) Practically every het story I've seen is Roy/Peach.))

*hugs Quasi, Pichu, and Pikachu* This was a funny (and demented) romance story, and I actually enjoyed it.
crystalicios 2006-07-31 . chapter 1
^o^ wow!! Mewtwo Peach? Peach Mewtwo? *breaks out "Mewtwo and Peach sittin' in a tree... K-I-S-S-I-N-G!*

Or not.

Funneh. Oh yeah... If you seriously wanted to tell Yoshizilla that you didn't copy it from his fic, you could've replied to his review by PM.

And That is all.

Musical chapter though.
falcored 2006-07-30 . chapter 1
Oh and just to reply to Yoshizilla's review I did NOT get this idea from one of his stories, I came up with it on my own.
Yoshizilla-Rhedosaurus 2006-07-30 . chapter 1
That was GREAT!! And hilarious, too! Peach and Mewtwo together...you want to know something really awesome? I'll tell you. I invented the Peach and Mewtwo couple! I introduced it in one of my neglected fanfics, oh, one called "Tales of Cruxion", a story I had faith in, but didn't have any time or sinparation to do it. I am guessing that you either decided to use the pair because you guessed it (which, might I add, is a pretty good guess), or you probably did read my "Tales of Cruxion" fanfic, but didn't review. It's okay, I got no hard feelings if you didn't review. But, for the sake of all that is Smashtismic, you have to at LEASt give me credit for the Peach and Mewtwo thing, because I really started it. Thanks for taking this time to read my reviews.

Peace! -Yoshizilla

*adds to favs*

*adds to alert*

*adds to C2*
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