Aw a nice little royai fic in the multitude of angst and violence, I like it!

Just a question though, is this the first time he's said I love you or do they already have a relationship?

Can't wait for a next fic. :D

and so would I. :3 Draw the dress for us? :D

I love the introduction, it just sets up the plot very nicely :3

wow, this is good. i should read more of your fics

Whao, whao, whao, whao!!
that's awsome!!
YEAH!!
great job!
nicly writin'!!

'please, keep writing!'

wowowoow so cute short, sweet , and to the point!

Sweet! BTW, is the doll wearing a wedding dress? Its quite obvious actually, but I just wanna be sure...

Aw! That was yummy! I really lieked that!

aw that was cute.
i liked how it ended
that is so roy hahahaha
i really want to see you in that dress
hahahaha
total moment ruiner!
hahahahaha
well i like this story
its very cute
and i like how riza was the one who started the moment

I would like to host some of you writings on the fanfiction site I am putting up. I need a bunch of featured authors and I'd like you to be a part of it. Please let me know.

I like this story it is very well written.

ok...ok...i calm myself down...nah, i cant...KAWAI! OMG THAT IS SO CUTE! I loved it!! Roy and Riza are so meant to be, its so painfully obvious that they love each other but none say anything...just like Ed and Win...--sigh- Anyway, nice story, I liked it, and yes, it would be funny 2 see Riza in a dress.

That was very sweet. Just a couple of typos but nothing major. Very good job. :)

Wow, such a sweet Royai story. I haven't seen one of these around in a little while, actually. It really made me feel a bit better after a fairly bad day. So, thank you for spreading the Royai around the place and bringing a nice smile to one's face. =)

- Sailor Starlight Girl

I know I don't say it nearly enough and I'm still not going to say it now, because this story wasn't cute...it was beyond that. I loved how Riza made the first move instead of Roy and I loved Riza's comment about the doll and Roy's comment about the dress at the end. Very well done, keep up the great work!^^