And that I happen later? this very good one

mno, i need more! i love this so much! accualy i have this insane sort of crush on jack, don't ask why, and seeing his past with the bleeding etc. was really fasinating, it made him more real and less anoying. please make more, PLEASE
u have some real talent

oh cool...CONTINUE!

Weird! Write more.

sweet. that's awesome. jack's so...i dunno. he's weird, but he's my favorite.

He's the only reason why i watch the show in the first place.

well, this story is cool. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Heh! I love this story so far. Very interesting and amusing. Can't wait for more! ^_^

Hm, I like this. I hope to read more soon

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I love this chapter wearry interesting

good, but your a loonatic

This is a good story. I realy like it. Please update soon ^_^

I hope you keep updating! This might be a good story if you put a little more 'oomph' into it! ...No offense.

I'm really liking this so far! "I will stay, but I expect to be served wine and food befit of a god." Loved that quote. Anyways, can't wait for more!

that was slightly freaky, but mostly funny and well written.

YAY! A Xiaolin Showdown fic from one of my favorite fanfiction authors! Excellent first chapter, looking forward to more!
~~Sirius LIVES~~

This story is really good. I like the concept. Please update soon.