From Dark Sora94,

Intresting. The idea of a Zero copy/clone is a good idea (seeing as I created one as well). Update soon!

Masumara: Another clone of that inferior hybird? Great. As long as it stays evil and does not make friends with my copy, i'm good.

Copy Zero and Zero X: WHAT THE!?!

Me and Masumara: Great...

Man, is this getting good. I'll be waiting for an update.

That was so awesome! The part with Shami was PERFECT!! Exactly what I was going for. The last line was really cool. and scary... mysterious too. Update Soon!

I'm making five chapters of red pandas tonight. xD

Ember: I have a name u know?! It's EMBER E-M-B-E-R got it memorized?

Great now she's talking like Axel. By the way did you know they're making a KH2 Final Mix with a COM remake for the PS2?

Luv the conversation between Fonce and Zero X, this was a really good chappy by the way. I also updated The Flame Mamodo if u wanna read that.

Ah, at last! And it was worth the wait! Foncé's bit with the flowers was absolutely perfect, and I just generally loved the conversation with her and Zero X.

Foncé: I don't need you any more Zé-Zé! I've got Zé-Zé X to keep me company now, and the power of Serpenté will be mine again!

Me: Erm, right.

Really good so far, plz continue!. ^_~

Update Soon!

OMG!! That was awesome!

Would you by any chance willing to have Tai Shan and Shami in the story a little bit?

I thought that last line was awesome... dun dun dun... I totally visualized Zero's dream. Espescially the part about them fighting their twin dark souls.

Update soon!!

I never imagined that you'd put Zero in the opening to Kingdom Hearts 2 with the same music? I was thinking about maybe doing that with Ember but you beat me to it.

But it was awesome!

I don't mind waiting a while for Ember to appear. Besides I'm halfway done with the second chappy of her story The Flame Mamodo.

Let me guess that Zero look alike as Zero X?

Ember: I bet you're right Chelsea

Me: Wher'd u come from?!

Ember: *thinking* I don't know

Me: *sigh*

Ember: Looking forward Rahkshi!

Me: Update when ya can amigoe!

NO! Otouto, you baka! That's not the real one!

Anyways, another good chapter. Keep going.

This is great! Don't worry Rahkshi, I'm very pleased with how Foncé turned out here! The past and interactions with Arisha you gave her are much more interesting than what I originally planed. When they meet in my story there's SO going to be a cat-fight between them now.

Zero's dream was cool too, and I like how Arisha feeds on Zero in his sleep. It's good to see that Kage's okay too.

*sits at computer screen in shock*

Tai: Jason... Jason? JASON?!! *{chokes me*

Me: *drooling* *grabs Rahk and hugs*

RAhk: CHOKING NOT BREATHING!

*Everyone else tries to get me off of Rahk*

Tai: *beats me up*

Me: *on the ground motionless*

Tiko: YOU KILLEd HIM! TU ES STUPIDO!

*Tai and Tiko fight*

Aw... thanks Rahk, I'm guessing that was the surprise and that was a great one. IT was so sad when they parted. I was like crying. *tears*

*Tai swims in tears*

lol, update soon!

Awesome chappy Rahkshi! I REALLY can't wait for u to upddate!

(a/n I'm really happy so there are ! marks)

ttyl amigoe

This one's really amazing so far. I love any description of the Ever Night Forest, and I imagine the Creatures of the Night town like Halloween Town from The Nightmare Before Christmas or the Land of the Dead from Cropse Bride.

By the way, the name of any symbol depicting the yin and yang is called taijitu, but not a lot of people would understand that, so writing yin-yang symbol is a good idea.

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

On the contrary, I could not portrayed Kage or me better myself; my voice, though, is more 'monotone' than this.

"Welcome to the darkness." Loved that line.

"I AM the darkness." So am I, Rahk. So am I.