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| Angelibriel 2007-05-19 ch 1,  | abuseAhora mismo estoy viendo el cap 72 de Naruto, la pelea entre orochimaru y Sarutobi (nunca recuerdo si es el tercero o el cuarto hokage) y se me antojo buscar un fic de estos dos, no los encontre en español asi que tuve que intentar en ingles... que mal que no hayas tomado una cancion asi podria haberle puesto musica mientras lo leia. Sorry, i don´t speak english... So... i love you fiction... so bad you don´t add music at your fic... but i like it... p.d. sorry, i remember you, i don´t speak english. |
| Moth Gypsy 2007-01-28 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good :) I liked how here and there there were very subtle ryhmes and some words that almost rymed but didnt quite. Very poetic and true to the characters, well done. |
| Essyllus 2006-11-21 ch 1, | abuseo_0 I thought I was reading Avatar until the AN in the end. I was thinking Zhao and his old teacher... it could have worked as well. The chorus would have sounded more surreal. *admires awesome fanfic lyric skillz* This makes me want to write the music to it. xD |
| Eowyn-sama 2006-11-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseWonderful! I haven't read/watched Naruto for far to long now, but . . . wow ^_^ |
| almostinsane 2006-08-19 ch 1, | abuseGreat song! Poor Third Hokage... I wonder what Ocrochimaru could have been if he was good. The only problem I have is when you said goddamn. I'm very religious. On another note, Orochimaru reminds me of the Devil. |
| Nikki 2006-07-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseI must say, this is brilliant. I usually pass the poetry and songs and such that I see written on by, but I adore your other works so I figured I'd read this. I absolutely love it; I can definitely appreciate the creativity it took to write this. The last two paragraphs (stanzas?) gave me chills! ^_^ Excellent job! ~Nikki |
| Blonde-Existentialist 2006-07-31 ch 1, | abuseHum, interesting. And rather different from the norm no. I can't say I'm personally a big fan of filk, but you did a nice job with the genre; keeping it from being goofy or campy or ballady. |
| Azamiko 2006-07-31 ch 1, | abusePretty awesome... |
| Dreammistress Jade 2006-07-31 ch 1, | abuseLovely job. :) ~Toodles!~ |
| Tiasha 2006-07-31 ch 1, | abuseVery well done for your first attempt! :) It was very smooth in the transitions and overall was just wonderful. :) |
| Outsane 2006-07-31 ch 1, | abuseFilk, eh? Interesting. I gotta tell you, I've never been a big fan of song fics or poetry, but I really enjoyed this. At first I thought it was about Sasuke and Kakashi, but then I started to think that that didn't make sense. It's brilliant as a Third/Orochimaru song (er, but not as a pairing, I just used the slash cuz it was easier). Very nice job! ^_^ |