hehe, I like it. But you have it so you can't tell what their movements are. I mean for all the reader knows Dan could be siting happly on a desk swinging his feet, and yell'en at Clockwork. ) hehe...that would be kind of creepy. But other than that...it twas very good. keep writing.

damn it! i'd like to know what is so fucking bad about exsisting that not even clockwork has the guts to say anything about it, too! will you please tell me? i'll die if you don't!

elyn

wow, what an intriguing little drabble XD

I rather liked it. A little heavy on the angst, but that's just me and my happy-go-lucky additude. I really did like reading it!

Are you going to add more. This is very good. I would like to see more added. More silent angst is good. Always good to have silent agnst.

Beautifully executed, as usual. You really are one of this fandom's better writers.

Dan has a point. If CW hadn't sent Box Lunch into the past Dan would never have been created. So technically CW is responsible for Dan's creation.