This was a well-written story with lots of twists and turns. I must admit I was very disappointed about the ending, I mean Harry should start growing a pair and face reality and even if it was hard, then Luna could be on his side. I mean didn't he realize that if he and Nora ever had children it was very likely they would be magical, which would then drag him right back into the magical world and give him back his memories? So great story, with a disappointing ending.

Due to the appallingly few reviews given to this exceptional story, I am now writing my first review in over a year, maybe longer.

While I personally do not like your Harry as a character, as he is very weak willed, you did write it in a very believable way and I very much enjoyed the story because of it. I felt you gave a very accurate portrayal of not being able to cope, and the sense of hopelessness that accompanies it.

The only criticism I have is the Voldemort scene, which felt a little choppy to me. Or, I should say, the fight scene was. But the main focus of this story was never action, and was as good as can be expected.

I'm not sure how I stumbled upon this story, as it is quite old, but I'm glad I did; because of it, I'm going to read your other stories.

- Best regards, Phantom

Good job, nineteen year old self. You may be physically weaker, intellectually inferior, and just plain old n00bish, but this is entertaining me. Mostly because I keep forgetting what is going to happen next, yet also because it's giving me some cool ideas on what I want to do for those other stories lying around on this site, unfinished. Cool story, bro.

I liked the story. Good premise and well written. It felt a little melodramatic in places, the way they all seem to fall in love in such short amounts of time. One thing that I am too picky to let go: Women don't have adam's apples, so it's a little disturbing when Nora references hers when missing her necklace.

Anyways, this was a good idea. The tone is just shy of being perfect... I wish I could accurately describe what strikes me as wrong about it, but the closest I can come is saying that everyone has "too many feelings". All in all, not a bad read. It was captivating enough for me to read it from start to finish

Awesome story! Pretty emotional and almost made me cry =/

I really like your story :)

Very interesting story. I don't like the way it ended, but that is more personal preference. Overall it is well written and, as far as fanfiction goes, very original. But I wish Harry would have ended up with a different character. I know this review is vague, but I hate spoilers in reviews.

The story was fairly well done. Bit of a downer though. Poor Luna.

Oh god. I was a mess as Harry was talking to Hermione as Ron. That was just amazing. Absolutely amazing.

i read this story again, and dont know i love it

good story. I prefer HArry/Luna stories but it's really good anyway. finding himself, working through problems. good

A sad ending... An entire sad story rather, but I think it was good.

Wow. First of all, well written. It kept me hooked the entire time. Second, excellent plot, although I both love and hate the ending. Overall, great job.

Hi! I read Obliviate more or less straight through. Your writing is amazing...detail and descriptions outstanding. The storyline isn't my cup of tea (you know how much I try to stick to cannon hehehe), but that said, I found myself really enjoying it. I, like many, would have liked to seen Harry end up with Luna, but also realised that it wasn't to be. For Harry to be truely free, he had to leave Luna behind.

Well done, ole' boy. Pip Pip and all that jazz!

This stroy's really good to. I like how you started it off in the beginning then slowly added more and more details. It was good,

Lilacbookstar

I really enjoyed the plot of this story It is really well written. I just feel really bad for Luna at the end of its seems like she was used and got delt the bad hand. loved it though.