Reviews for Rain Keeps Falling

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MarieLightning 2006-12-01 ch 16,	abuseThis fic was Amazing! First of I have to say that the first time I saw something which was Jaylie (it was a video) I was: er... what the heck? I thought it was rather stupid and too much out of character for me. And then I started reading this fic. Seriously, it's amazing how a well written fic can change someone's mind about anything, and you definitely changed mine. This story was perfect in everyway, if not the fact that it ended too soon as I wished it could go on forever! but yeah, I know we all have to end up at some point lol. I also love to think that Jay is not necessarely the guy we think him to be, all his sweet attentions toward Ellie, like when he carried her back home, that was so nice, I love that side of him, as much as I love his sarcastic and arrogant one lol (wouldn't be him without that!) I also want to mention that I started reading your fic early on a week day morning lol and I was so into it that I printed it all because I knew I wouldn't be able to finish it before leaving for school. I've read it about 4 times now during my bus trip to school lol. Seriously, your fic was great and I'm not completely obsessed with Jay/Ellie, I just wish there were more fics about them! I'm actually writing one right now XD Okay so this was a very long review, sorry lol. Good job again, can't wait to read more of your stuff!
BlackRoseOnFire 2006-10-09 ch 16,	abuseI absolutely loved the ending to the story! It is defintely one of my favorites that I've ever read on this site. You're an awesome writer. I'm sad to be done, but it ended perfectly!
BlackRoseOnFire 2006-10-09 ch 15,	abuseI really really hope they make up. I felt so bad for Ellie when he asked her to send Alex in.
BlackRoseOnFire 2006-10-09 ch 14,	abuseI'm glad Ellie told him off. Mr. Hogart seems like an **. And I'm glad that Manny's sticking up for Ellie. They make an interesting pair of friends. As always, I love this story.
BlackRoseOnFire 2006-10-09 ch 13,	abuseThis chapter was so sad. I'm glad that she slapped Craig and I think Manny should be ** at him too. I noticed that they haven't fought about the kiss yet. Hopefully Craig decides to go back to Vancouver and Jay wakes up soon.
BlackRoseOnFire 2006-10-09 ch 12,	abuseHe better be okay! I knew something like that was going to happen. And it's all Craig's stupid fault for kissing her. >.
BlackRoseOnFire 2006-10-09 ch 11,	abuseAw look at Jay playing matchmaker. It was funny that he was able to get them to go where he wanted them to go...but of course, they wanted to go those places too...he just showed them that. Anyway, I only have five more chapters to go! I'll be sad when it's over.
BlackRoseOnFire 2006-10-09 ch 10,	abuseI wonder who's watching them! I'm gonna guess Craig...and he'll be jealous or interrupt. I'm glad Jay came back that night though. I have to read more right now!
BlackRoseOnFire 2006-10-09 ch 9,	abuseAww I'm glad that they're moving forward. Hmm hopefully Jay just wanted a reason to kiss her because I was thinking that would suck if their first kiss was really because he was trying to get rid of some other girl. I still love this story!
BlackRoseOnFire 2006-10-09 ch 8,	abuseI loved how Manny and Jay were going back and forth...and how Jay pretty much won. Great chapter!
BlackRoseOnFire 2006-10-09 ch 7,	abuseThis is one of my favorite chapters too! I just loved the interaction between them, like when Jay brushed her hair out of her face, and then stayed sitting on her floor while she slept. They are perfect for each other and you're a great writer!
BlackRoseOnFire 2006-10-08 ch 6,	abuseThis was definitely my favorite chapter! I love listening to the rain and I absolutely love going outside and running around in it. You are an awesome writer. I really wanted them to kiss, but the way you wrote it was so much better. I liked how he said "What are you trying to do to me, Red?" That was probably the best line in the chapter.
BlackRoseOnFire 2006-10-08 ch 5,	abuseI'm gonna guess that it is going to lead to a whole lot of drama, and she did make a big mistake. Because by then, she may have developed more feelings for Jay and then Craig comes and messes things up. I think he'll be jealous of Jay and probably pick fights to try and "win Ellie back." I still love this story...it's so good!
BlackRoseOnFire 2006-10-08 ch 4,	abuseJay and Ellie are so cute together. I can't wait to see what happens next; I love this!
BlackRoseOnFire 2006-10-08 ch 3,	abuseWow, Jay and Ellie do have so much in common! I think they'll end up together. I really love this story!

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