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| alana124pyro 2008-04-22 ch 5, | abuseaww, so it's complete? it's a very sweet story i can smell something beginning here! lolz i just wish u had continued with the story...i think i read about a sequel? maybe...mabye not...i'll have to go back and look rock on and payce out |
| pamellka 2008-02-24 ch 5, | abuse~Only 5 chapters T_T Can't you make a sequel or something?Please? |
| Welshteen 2007-12-02 ch 5, | abusecool! love it update soon! |
| Shikyo no Sabaku 2007-10-19 ch 5, | abuseHehe, very nice story. Looking forward to the sequel. ^^ |
| Akito Udahare 2007-08-20 ch 6, | abuseomg this story rocks please continue |
| CrazyCat95 2007-07-09 ch 6, | abuse...SCARY... |
| Bloody and Broken 2007-05-26 ch 6, | abuseThat a story- I mean this story yeah- rocked out loud!! I luved it! I will be reading the sequel! |
| Ash 2007-04-10 ch 6, anon. | abuseI think someone said it already but I really liked how incharacter everyone was. It hadn't occured to me that Gaara wouldn't understand playful taunting either. |
| Niobe Jones 2007-04-10 ch 5, | abuseCute! This is a nice set up to a something more fic! I really liked it! It was so sweet! |
| The-Crazies 2007-04-09 ch 6, | abuse? |
| YourAngelStandingBy 2007-04-02 ch 5, | abuseI love how you kept them all amazingly in character. Short, but very good. -Angel |
| Girl-who-sings-the-blues 2007-03-10 ch 6, | abuseWell...at least he's Naruto's friend! |
| Girl-who-sings-the-blues 2007-03-10 ch 5, | abuse...Awesome...a Sand Umbrella?! |
| Girl-who-sings-the-blues 2007-03-10 ch 4, | abuse...lol "May I?" ...(please don't kill me, please don't kill me, please don't kill me...) wow...I remember that...drinking off someone else is like kissing them...(not quite)! |
| Girl-who-sings-the-blues 2007-03-10 ch 3, | abuseLike I said neither is Kakashi...that kill joy! |