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| garden-crafter 2006-09-29 ch 1, | abuseShiny ! You write River well, and this gave a very vivid picture of how much DANCING is an esential part of River (and a reason for why she loves to go barefoot). |
| RoseApprentice 2006-08-03 ch 1, | abuseIt's crazy and makes sense just like River's mind. And it glows cool colors. |
| Jas 2006-07-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseShiny! A fantastic job. :) |
| BlueEyedBrigadier 2006-07-31 ch 1, | abuseWow...now this is some mighty fine introspection on River's part, and on a topic that would seem...frivilous if stopped reading when River started thinking about her feet. But you have really managed to capture River's feelings and pain over her feet pretty much remaining the only thing unscarred and untainted by what the Academy did to her and the actions she has taken since being rescued by Simon. Oh...the last line? Beatufiul thought:D BEB |
| badluckmermaid 2006-07-31 ch 1, | abusethis was a great river ficlet - r tam sessions echoes nicely within... keep up the good work! |