your story so far is quite good but there are a few things i would like to point out. firstly, you use of honorifics- sakura calls tsunade shishou 'master' not senpai 'older student'. secondly tsunade must've been drunk when she ranked the anbu that high. if they are still ruled by such petty emotions that get in the way of the mission, they would've never graduated to the black ops. neji is out of character- he isn't that attached to tenten that he would almost abandon his mission. naruto is mostly cynical and would not get his love for hinata get in the way of a mission. if you truly want to write a romance then write the ninjas a little younger because they are acting ooc for anbu.

OMG! so riled up right now! It's hard to find a story that has a good plot and that actually makes sense! especially with crossovers. What happens next? Can't wait for the next chapter!

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I loooove it all! The plot, the characters, the pairings,

everything! :)

Please update soon! :D

It was worth the wait, definately. You should really continue this story, it is very well written and a good read. Looking forward to another chapter.

i think that its the homunculi from fullmetal alchemist that have teamed up wit voldemort and are trying to take over the castle and such!...just my guess...onto the next chapter! _ love this story!

I really like the theme you have for this story and its very well worded and I love the whole pairs thing keep up the good work

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nice.

This is a very interesting story, it's a pleasure to read something with such a riveting plotline. I like your concepts, especially the chakra-magic bond; it's a very unique development! And Sasuke's and Snape's virtue made me crack up.

You made some mistakes though, since your crossover takes place in the 5th year of Harry Potter-

“Hey Luna! Happy birthday! You’re turning sixteen, right?”

“Haha, happy sweet sixteen on the sixteenth of January!”

“What? Bollocks, I put the wrong age on her card then…”

Shino was a bit perplexed at the riot down at the Gryffindor table’s end. Students swarmed around his bond-partner, patting her, wishing her happy birthday, and giving her presents. He had no idea that she was rather popular.

-then technically, Luna should be turning 14, since she's a year younger than Harry. And she's also a Ravenclaw, which means that the "riot" should be happening at the Ravenclaw table.

I hope you update this fic soon, good luck!

nice

In one of the first few chapters, you said that Naruto was number two and Sasuke was number three.

But, as of right now, it seems that Sasuke is the more powerful one, seeing as he gets all the action.

And akso in this chapter, Sakura comes up with the plan, even though Shikamaru's the tactition.

And also, with the suffixes, you put Hinata - san, and the space between the dash and the words REALLY bug me. That is the first time that I have EVER seen it done that way. The way that I would do it is Hinata-san.

Sorry if this seems like a flame, its just that some of these things have been bugging me and I wanted to bring them to your awerness.

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Yay!... You updated!... Finally! :D

Anyway, great chapter, it actually helped me remeber the partners, I always seem to forget... -_-

Hehe, so keep up the good !work!

If you want to read or watch more of Naurto i can give you a couple of sites..if you want...i don't know if you already know about it but :

...um.. in your note at the bottom. I do agree with Shikamaru's inner eye but Gaara doesn't have one. Gaara has the third eye. sorry if this review may annoy you or anything but i just wanted to point that out..

gya more pls 3