Oops, I forgot to review this when I favorited it... anyway, I just love your stories and writing style! I haven't played pokemon for a long time now so don't recognize some of the pokemons, especially the newer ones... Anyway, I can't wait until you update this! And all your other stories for that matter, especially The Claede Monet and The Greatest Cladiator.

I don't know what else to say, I haven't wrote a review in a long time...

Have no fear, for I am here!...Okay stupid entrance, never mind. Ah don't get discouraged about reviews. Your Pokemon fanfic rocks! I've never read one that goes like the game, so this story is all the more interesting ^^

It's also nice to stumble upon a Pokemon fanfic that doesn't involve Misty drooling over Ash or vice versa...So kudos to you!

I feel sorry for Liz and her fear for Steelix though. It's one of my favourite Pokemon xD

Anyhow, keep up the good work!

That was a great story! But, really. This is REALLY base4d on the game. With all the levels and such. But, this is good. I think that way, you can track the progress of your pokemon faster. Right?

I just started reading your story today, and I like it! :) I've always been a pokemon fan, standing strong against a the digimon fans! *triumph* haha, anyways, it seems cool, I be sure to keep reading it! :) It inspired me to pick up my crystal version again, and I'd forgotten I had a level 100 Seadra and level 79 Pikachu on there! So I'm very happy now, all thanks to you! lol

LURVE!

Welcome Back Storm!

I was so excited to see that you updated this story! I liked how this chapter flowed, from Tododile's needle fears to Crystal's reaction to being called Cryssie lmao! I liked the battle between Liz and Kallie, Hm, a water type battling against a grass type that ends in a tie? Her Bulbasaur is a grass type and should have had an advantage. But oh well, its your story. Thanks for the explination as to how Cloudburst could beat Ninetales. Overall you do such a good job at making the story come to life in a very belivable way. You've inspired me to finally get back into my own Pokemon stories and I thank you for that! Cya next chapter.

This story is great! I normally don't like stories where it's 'the new trainer going off on an adventure' deal, but you present it in a great way! I can't wait for the next chapter, keep writing!

Sneer is a... unique name. I named my rival Riku because I named my character Kairi. The wonders of my fangirliness and the effects from Kingdom Hearts. Also I am sorry to say that Mr. Brambleton scares me. Scares me a lot... And I'm just going to guess that Jasmine will leech off of Crystal, slowly annoying her with the rich girl sterotype routine close to insanity... WHAT HAVE YOU DONE MY CHILD?! Just kiddin', can't wait for the next installment of Help Me, I'm- wait a minute... Wrong show! Bring on the Gir eating tacos, Gwen Stefani and new chappies!

Peace from the hyper Sugar dragon, Ryu-chu

Yo! Good story! I like the way you descirbe things, you do a good job at it. Well that's all I have say for now. Until next time...CYA!

Yeah! another awesome chapter. So is the red headed "sneer" going to become Liz's rival (like in the game)? Or is this just were your introducing him? I Liked the battle with Cloudburst and the Ninetales, but the Ninetale must have been pretty weak to have been defeated by a Pidgey, no offence but I just can't see it going that way. I also liked how you discribed the pain felt as a result of the Chikorita's razor leaf attack. Do Pokemon feel this when their attacked, Hell yeah they do! One small comment, Before landing at Brambleton Estate Crystal commented that she dosn't like arrogance, however she comes off as arrogant (at least to me) is this just the way she is? Or is ti a misperseption on my part. Jasmine is worse?? Can't wait to find out why! Looking forward to the next chapter!

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sweet beginning...that totodile sure is cute! i'll read some more!

i found out about this story from 'black wings of my secrets' and usually i totally hate stories with OC's but i totally love this one!

lol, loved the whole sister and sandshrew thing

kind of random but since your a pokemon fan (like me) you'd probably like the website called pokemon crater, told you it was random.

GREAT chapter! *.* Oh, and, of course I love pokemon! :o They kick digimon ass! "Nowadays it seems to have died from the hearts of all teens who were loyal
fans in their childhood." Sigh... It's so sad... But the battle with the Rattata was cool. I personally like them, but this was well detailed and well worthy of a compliment. :D

Awesome chapter! Yeah. (Stands and applauds loudly)! I can't wait to read the next chapter. I liked Cloudburst's reaction to Tanya. I bet he proves to be one of Liz's best Pokemon. Poor Crystal, she has to tolerate the airhead blonde. I guess thats the price yoou pay for fame. I really want to see Crystal battle, hope it happens soon!

The thought of my Blaziken getting screwed by my Camerupt is kinda disturbing... I wonder what happens when I put my Ditto with my Gardeior... CENSORED! Anyway, great chapter! I wonder what Crystal's super ultra secret awesome pokemon is! Let's play... Who's that super ultra secret awesome pokemon?!?! Ok, Celebi? Nah... Oh how about Latias! I love Latias! Or Latios! OH I KNOW WHAT THE POKEMON IS! ITS... MISSINGNO! Now Crystal can glitch up any pokemon on the planet! Bring on the fluff, chocolate covered pencils, and new chapters!

Peace from the hyper sugar dragon, Ryu-chu

Another good chapter! Will Crystal use her Tyranitar in her upcomimg battle? I hope so! Yeah! Liz caught a Pidgey! I hope she lets it evolve into the awesome Pidgeot! Hope to see the next chapter soon!