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I hope you write more of this.I really want to see if Joan and William hook up.

Cool, this chapter was formteed in a much easier way to read.

I enjoyed the girls lunch and how they support each other.

You do a good job of capturing the real way the girls speak to each other. and I love that you mentioned joan loving william.

One suggestion- double space from now on. It makes it a whole lot easier to read.

I really like it so far! Please CONTINUE!