*Sniffles* So sad. Brilliantly written. (Is that a word?)... Loved it!

Hmm... Is Tawnypaw Tawnypelt? No, she can't be... You said Windclan? Is Thornpaw Thornclaw? Hm...

Peppertail of Leafclan

I love your oneshots.
Period.
:3

Great oneshot! But I think it would be better if it had more chapters. But still, great story.

Cool! I love it!

Poor Tawnypaw and Thornpaw! [[ who I just figured out was not Tawnypelt of Shadowclan, and Thornpaw who I relized was not Thornclaw of Thunderclan]]

You really should make this into a chappie story, cause you're a really good writer. ;D

So sweet...and so tragic. Beautiful, all the same. I do believe that the WindClan Tawnypaw became Tawnyfur before she died, though.

wow, another really great oneshot! i can't wait for the next one

You're just dishing out the oneshots like mad today, aren't you? XD
I thought Tawnypaw/fur died as a warrior, in A Dangerous Path. But whatever, it's a great fic.