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Six-string Samurai
2008-12-06 . chapter 9
It's a few years old, but I clap for it nonetheless.
NegativeSpaces
2008-08-09 . chapter 9
*smiles* It's too bad that Ron died, but atleast Kim found happiness with Shego. That was a really good and well written fiction, hope you keep on doing KiGo, you seem to have a knack for it.
Wispr
2008-04-28 . chapter 9
Damn that was a great ending.

Wispr
Wispr
2008-04-28 . chapter 8
How you got Kim's nervousness about coming out was really well done.

Wispr
Wispr
2008-04-28 . chapter 7
Man that was good and heart wrenching!

Wispr
Wispr
2008-04-28 . chapter 6
Having a blast with your story, you are doing good with the character depth.

Wispr
Wispr
2008-04-28 . chapter 5
Wow... I have to say you are really keeping this interesting!

Wispr
Wispr
2008-04-28 . chapter 4
I like how adult Shego is being.

Wispr
Wispr
2008-04-27 . chapter 3
I'm really enjoying this story!
Good work.

Wispr
Wispr
2008-04-27 . chapter 2
You have a very good writing style, very descriptive but at the same time the words flow easily.

Wispr
Wispr
2008-04-27 . chapter 1
What an interesting start. Glad that Ron's death wasn't a waste.

Wispr
Gonzo250
2008-04-10 . chapter 9
Nice story, very enjoyable.

One thing.

What's with all the crying?! I know how emotional women can be, but damn, dude! All Kim seemed to do was cry! There's so many other ways you coulda got Kim to show emotion rather than turn on the waterworks. Anger, rage, detachment, denial, blowing a gasket and doing the whole 'i'm fine, i'm fine, i'm fine' happy headcase routine...

Variation woulda made this far more entertaining to read.
charis-chan
2007-10-15 . chapter 9
Okay... in simple words: I love it! This is the first fic that really made me fell down a couple of days. I love Shego's personality. Hell I love the fic.
Thoughts13
2007-08-14 . chapter 9
great fic.
Shalimar23
2007-06-14 . chapter 9
wow you made me cry. other then that the only thing i have to say is i LOVE this story!
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