 Six-string Samurai 2008-12-06 . chapter 9It's a few years old, but I clap for it nonetheless. |
 NegativeSpaces 2008-08-09 . chapter 9*smiles* It's too bad that Ron died, but atleast Kim found happiness with Shego. That was a really good and well written fiction, hope you keep on doing KiGo, you seem to have a knack for it. |
 Wispr 2008-04-28 . chapter 9Damn that was a great ending.
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 Wispr 2008-04-28 . chapter 8How you got Kim's nervousness about coming out was really well done.
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 Wispr 2008-04-28 . chapter 7Man that was good and heart wrenching!
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 Wispr 2008-04-28 . chapter 6Having a blast with your story, you are doing good with the character depth.
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 Wispr 2008-04-28 . chapter 5Wow... I have to say you are really keeping this interesting!
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 Wispr 2008-04-28 . chapter 4I like how adult Shego is being.
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 Wispr 2008-04-27 . chapter 3I'm really enjoying this story!
Good work.
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 Wispr 2008-04-27 . chapter 2You have a very good writing style, very descriptive but at the same time the words flow easily.
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 Wispr 2008-04-27 . chapter 1What an interesting start. Glad that Ron's death wasn't a waste.
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 Gonzo250 2008-04-10 . chapter 9Nice story, very enjoyable.
One thing.
What's with all the crying?! I know how emotional women can be, but damn, dude! All Kim seemed to do was cry! There's so many other ways you coulda got Kim to show emotion rather than turn on the waterworks. Anger, rage, detachment, denial, blowing a gasket and doing the whole 'i'm fine, i'm fine, i'm fine' happy headcase routine...
Variation woulda made this far more entertaining to read. |
 charis-chan 2007-10-15 . chapter 9Okay... in simple words: I love it! This is the first fic that really made me fell down a couple of days. I love Shego's personality. Hell I love the fic. |
 Thoughts13 2007-08-14 . chapter 9great fic. |
 Shalimar23 2007-06-14 . chapter 9wow you made me cry. other then that the only thing i have to say is i LOVE this story! |