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Reviews For: Ice Cold Lemonade

Kohana Natsumi
2008-06-12
ch 1,
abuseawesome story! i bet that really did happen.
Underneath All Elsewhere
2007-12-22
ch 1,
abuseThat was an adorable oneshot! I would have loved to see Jay and Ellie as a couple. They would have been interesting to watch, but I think it could have worked. I liked how you used one simple scene and made it so much more. Very creative idea.
Ellie CameronDB
2007-06-10
ch 1,
abuseWow this was such an amazing one-shot. I always enjoying your stories. Keep it up.
Freeing Alys
2006-08-17
ch 1,
abuseAw, I loved that! Jaylie is so cute and so was this story. I loved how you portrayed Ellie and Jay's personality, you got them right on.
xocrazililkelox
2006-08-16
ch 1,
abusegreat one hiter Jellie is so cute i like the comparison between Jay and lemonade i cant wait to read more of your stories (work )
starlight-886
2006-08-02
ch 1,
abuseThat was really good, I'm a big fan of the Jay/Ellie pairing, I think it would really work. I would love to see a sequel to this but if you don't do one that's fine. This was really good, I loved it. Im totally adding it to my favorites. Theres not enough Jay/Ellie related stories out there.
flowersinthespringtime
2006-08-01
ch 1,
abusei like it
Courtney77
2006-08-01
ch 1,
abuseI love the interaction you have set up here with these two. It's great!
Mavsfan77
2006-07-31
ch 1,
abuseIt was really good!
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