|
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Kohana Natsumi 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abuseawesome story! i bet that really did happen. |
| Underneath All Elsewhere 2007-12-22 ch 1, | abuseThat was an adorable oneshot! I would have loved to see Jay and Ellie as a couple. They would have been interesting to watch, but I think it could have worked. I liked how you used one simple scene and made it so much more. Very creative idea. |
| Ellie CameronDB 2007-06-10 ch 1, | abuseWow this was such an amazing one-shot. I always enjoying your stories. Keep it up. |
| Freeing Alys 2006-08-17 ch 1, | abuseAw, I loved that! Jaylie is so cute and so was this story. I loved how you portrayed Ellie and Jay's personality, you got them right on. |
| xocrazililkelox 2006-08-16 ch 1, | abusegreat one hiter Jellie is so cute i like the comparison between Jay and lemonade i cant wait to read more of your stories (work ) |
| starlight-886 2006-08-02 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good, I'm a big fan of the Jay/Ellie pairing, I think it would really work. I would love to see a sequel to this but if you don't do one that's fine. This was really good, I loved it. Im totally adding it to my favorites. Theres not enough Jay/Ellie related stories out there. |
| flowersinthespringtime 2006-08-01 ch 1, | abusei like it |
| Courtney77 2006-08-01 ch 1, | abuseI love the interaction you have set up here with these two. It's great! |
| Mavsfan77 2006-07-31 ch 1, | abuseIt was really good! |