To Waaaaaar!

Damn, you spin an excellant tale! Seriously, you need to return!

Just something that randomly hit me. I can't actually remember when you said it, but wasn't there some vampire law against turning people below 25? So why is there all this fuss about everyone wanting to turn Harry?

I know you said no big romances in your stories, but i am surprised you didn't do anything with Rahkesh and Nic.

I really liked this story and the one before it. I am kind of sad that the next story hasn't been updated in so long but I can understand how life can get away from you. I do have some questions if you don't mind replying to them...

What happen to Rahkesh's other animagi, the one's he blocked to get better control of his bird and snake?

Did Rahkesh ever fix his cloak?

What happen to Hedwig, Rahkesh said she could come back after Harry went away?

I hope you get the chance to get back to me but if not know that this is a pretty good story that I really enjoyed reading. I wish you the best of luck if you do keep writing.

Shire Fey

Enjoying the story but do feel a little uncomfortable with your many strong statements about the things you've created. It comes off a bit like bragging, a bit territorial, and may be somewhat inaccurate given the very wide pool of fantasy memes on offer. Also, whilst I realise that the story has several threads running throughout, I do get occasionally frustrated by inconsistencies, such as the annoying werewolf, Benjamin, getting killed off in an earlier chapter for doing a ritual beyond him, and now suddenly being alive and a friendly acquaintance with that class level.

I've noticed that your third offering in this trilogy is possibly abandoned, which is why I held off for so long in reading this story (I hate the lack of closure), but I do recommend that should you take it up again, you might benefit from keeping a notebook with all of your plot-points, no matter how minor, written out- both in chronological order and listed per character. It should help with a lot of the loose threads, though I do admire that you appear to have made adjustments for them when you could.

I'm re-reading this and I just had a thought: is the ancient-vampire/druid (Aldric?) Marluck? He is someone that Namach knows well and he is missing an eye. Could he be turned in the future and then flung back in time? And gone insane? It's a little far-fetched, but I thought I would share it anyway. :)

I keep noticing this and it keeps me wondering. After this chapter you start to wonder how Namach actually sees Rakesh. I mean, whatever plans he had, and however ruthlessly manipulative he would be, it was kinda clear that Namach was fond of Rahkesh. In this chapter however (especially at the end) he seems a whole lot colder. But then again, Namach couldn't be easy to figure out anyway. :) To me he's easily the most complicated person in this universe, and that's the way it should be. A 3000 year old powerful genius vampire shouldn't be easy to figure out. :) As long as he doesn't pull a Dumbledore and have Rahkesh's death planned out someway cause that would just be clishé. But I can't really see that happen anyway. Planning the downfall of the whole universe? Sure. Purely Rahkesh's? Naaaah. :D

I'm kinda hoping that the final transformation with the dragonblood will give Rahkesh a longer lifespan (though not necessarily immortality). Cause most of his friends have a HUGE lifespan compared to his and I kinda wanna see him reach his utmost potential (so that would definitely mean he'd be a grandmaster blookmage among other things). :D

Here comes some speculation about Rahkesh's fear of foreign (mind) magic. :) (in my third time reading this) At first I thought it was because of Snape's occlumency lessons because face it, the way he went about it with an already traumatised teenager was enough to create a huge phobia in anyone. But now I think it's about the end of that year, the time that Voldemort posessed Harry. That seems to me the reason now. For someone with a thunderbird in their soul to be painfully overtaken and used like that would be unthinkable...

Even if you aren't updating anytime soon (which I get), any chance you can make a statement on your profile? Cause there's a lot of people out there eagerly (and maybe a bit obsessively ;)) waiting for the continueation of Rahkesh's trilogy. So if you're just busy but planning to continue it at some unspecified time, or if you are writing right now but only plan to update if you have more written, or even if you don't plan to continue at all... We'd like to know. Any chance for that? Cause the uncertainty is killing me and I bet I'm not the only one. :)

I absolutely LOVED THIS CHAPTER! I was completely and totally surprosed by the end! WHAT WAS THAT! :O I really can't wait to see what you do with this story. You really were right its seriously complex and just keeps getting crazier and crazier. I honestly can't put this story down! I don't know why I never read this before :) oh well, better late than never

Every review is worth it! This fanfiction is amazing!

Great story... though I would suggest that you choose where you cut off the stories to write the next part too... I'm not talking about the chapters.. those are great since it always leaves the reader looking for more... but for the different stories... like between the first story of and this story...

Other then that, I really love your story great plot, I can' stop reading I hope you continue writing!

Review from France ( if you doesn't understand all , it's normal )

Thank you for your fanfics

I can't bear english but I translate chapter for me because of your story !

kiss and good continuation !

great story.. I wish you would have finished the third but I loved it anyway...