I myself would've preferred a fanfic with Norrington...he's actually kinda sexy when he's down in the dumps...

Are you gonna write any more?

I loved this so much. Wish there was more, looking out for more of your work.

Love it! Update soon please!

OMG,do i want to be Lily right now, of course, not when Norrington finds, out, which he probably will, update soon! this is a great story!
nazy

no non non non no please tell me taht is not the end please please send me an emial with teh anwer you cant end it there comon damn please write more :'(

OMG!

OMG!

I aM ZIM!

Its awesome. What can I say? You human intellect has not failed you...pesky...human.

I give you the my Urkan power as an INVADER to continue on and make millions of dollars..

(Im a bit weird, sorry.)

Whee! Fun! I like it. More please. :)

Thank God for a good Pirates fanfic. I have read a great many Pirates stories, but yours takes the cake. Keep it up love:)

Brilliant, dearie! Absolutely wonderful! It has been a while since I have been able to come across a story that's actually noteworthy, and your depiction of Jack takes the cake. All of his Jackisms fit him to a T...and Lily is such a wonderful match for our dear Captain. Opposites attract and all that. I hope to read more from you in the future. Perhaps a continuation is in order, eh?

Sincerely and grammatically,
PaL

Good story so far. I like the idea and I can't wait to see what happens when Norrington finds out that Jack is sleeping in the same bed with Lily.

Great start...interested to see where it goes.