It was a good story and I hope you make a sequel. A happy one plz

Well, there it is. That wne through really well as a story, and it is just amazing the way you developed it. Every part contained great rising emotions that it was just impossible not to read on. Really, this site needs more good fics like this, lol.

That was good... Very good, but still...

"Fight the darkness.
You're not alone.
No way up and no way down,
this IS the only game in town!"
Just a song lyric I know, And I feel it fits here. I really thought Davis was doomed right until that moment. You go dude! Cool story! The best!

You know, if you had an editor, he could help you work the bugs out of your english in your stories. I'm always willing to help someone.

I actually enjoyed this story. I didn't know if I would at first (terrorist kidnapping?) but you wrote it so well. And English is your second language? I didn't know until you said. And I still couldn't tell by reading your stories; they're great.

Anyway, I really liked your Jun. I loved your description of Motomiyas: hot-tempered, crazy, stupid, pigheaded, noisy, mostly happy. A very excellent description of them. Anyway, I really enjoyed the stories, and I'll be looking around for your others!

Like I said, you are the master. Hell, I just wish I could writ as good as you!

very deep

I know I reveiwed before but I liked the story too much. You seem nice. UNLIKE SOME PEOPLE{Mouse glares at her so called friends} I'm so glad you finished. Could you write what happened during the hoilday. The holiday which had the terrorists.

PLEASE

Thank you for finishing

That is so sad.

Poor Jun.

Waaaaaaaaaaaa! THAT IS SO SA-A-AAAD! Poooooor Dai... *brightens up* Great story :)

Love it.

Oh my gosh. I never cry when reading stories. I'm crying. And I'm not afraid to admit it. It's hard to type because my keys are wet. This was one of THE BEST stories I have ever read. Please, more like this?