Well done! I think Bill deserves someone better than Fleur!
I can't believe Charlie did that! But it was justice, and he probably saved many lives that Mr X would have ruined/killed.
Nicely done.

totally scratch my review for chapter 19 the review button was getting weird on me and just typed in something weird. what it meant to say was that was it Charlie that killed X or Bill because i was confused?

excellent ending it really left me thinking about what would happen next.

I( cried again Remus. It's just so sad. I KNEW it wa scoming and I cried the first time I read it, so I thought I'd be cool. But I started crying anyway. It's so depressing...House is cool though...So yeah, Tuesday when I come to school, I'll likely have auburn hair. It might turn purple though, so you never know. YOu have another chapter right? And are you writing the funeral and the part after the flashback?

~Snuffles~

PISS! KILL MR. X! WE HATES HIM! BOB SAGET!

...Of course we knew this was coming...considering it's a flashback... WHATEVER... Anywho... Tootles!

~Snuffles~

P.S. 'Bob Saget' is the worlds newest swear word!

I've been silently following this story from the beginning, and I've finally decided to actually review...

I think the most intriguing thing about your story is that we (the readers) know Pippa is going to die. So while we all want her to fall in love with Bill and live happily ever after, we know it's not going to happen. So ever time they stop agruing and become a cute little couple again, we remember its not going to last. It's so sad, because she seems so perfect, and I wonder what went wrong and how she died.

On to this chapter! Poor Bill, having to babysit his brothers and sister when all he wants is a day alone with Pippa! Ha, ha. This little quote made me silently crack up with laughter (I regretfully couldn't laugh out loud, lest my family think I've finally lost it...)

“Well, if you’re so smart, and know what you think you know about what I did or didn’t do, then why are you keeping me from going back and doing it again?” Bill snapped, unintelligible as ever.

“Because you did it to your mother and I,” Mr. Weasley said humorlessly.

That was freakin' brilliant! Anyway, update soon! (Even if I don't always review, I'm still reading your story!) ChatterChick

Nice. I like the whole fat-head comment. It was really funny. And Mr. X kinda reminds me of Mr. Smith from the Matrix. I just love Pippa's attitude.

AH! No! Hey Lupin! Sup homie! I'm sick and it's like four in the morning, and I have to go to work in a few hours but I thought you ought to know that I have read this chapter and like it. By the way, you positively MUST see the Illusionist if you have not already. Edward Norton stars and it's REALLY good.

~Snuffles~

Finnegus is a cute name! You used my phrase, but I guess, since I am using your character, it evens out. Anyway this is so depressing... Anyway... TTYL!

~Snuffles~

Everyone is stupid. Pippa couldn't tell Bill because she didn't want him to worry. Because Pippa wasn't talking about it, Bill got worried. Mr. X is icky and thus inherently stupid. And I am positive that Pippa and Bill are far too stuborn for their own good. I tyhink everyone needs a bottle of rum, and their very own Jack Sparrow, that would set things to rights, I think.

~Snuffles~

REMUS!
I must first comment on this: "Why had Mr. X tried to hit on him?"
I noticed that Mr. X was creepy, and should I be thinking that Mr. X is a psycho perv? Because that's how we picture him.

Moving on...

EW!EW!EW! Mr. X is ICKY! Poor Pippa! EW!EW!


I hope she gets the money. I think it would be better to die than to have Mr X. ...eww...yeah.


~THe Siriusly Disturbed Snuffles~

She was going to impress Molly Weasley, or die trying.

And with Pip being as stuborn as she is, that's probably true. Oh yeah i really liked the whole "Pippa was the Undisputed Goddess of Food." part. you have so many funny and unique lines. anyway i'm off to read the next chapter.

“walking faux pas” Tehehe. Being a freanch student myself i know what that is. She cald him a socal blunder. hehe. srry i'm a dork. oh yeah, i liked how you ended it with a quote from Hamlet. anywho 2 down 2 to go. Haha

“Irish breakfast,” Pippa told him. “It’s the only kind I like.”

“Ah,” Bill said. “I’m pretty partial to Earl Grey, myself.”

“Well, you would be,” she answered with a smirk. “I’ve heard most English are.”

Oh snap. She told him. Sorry i just like this part. I'm so happy i finaly got to read this chapter. Well im off to read the next one. I WILL catch up tonight if it kills me.

HI REMUS! I would just Avada Kedavra Mr. X and be done with it, but I think that might cause some plot problems... One can always hope though. So is Pippa involved in illegal activities or is Mr. X just a creepy stalker? Either way he still has the creepy pedifile/stalker/criminal vibe going for him and that would win him a couple suitors in prison... Anywho... see you at school! We should catch up on our Peter Bashing, we were distinctly behind our quota last year, and I should hate for that to happen this year.

~~The Super Smexy Snuffles~~Sirius Leigh Black~~