Wished you'd update cause it is interesring.

OMG I love it, i can't wait for you to continue this one

Hey, glad to see you're still alive with this story!

Now this certainly isn't what I expected from Cthinde. I honestly thought he would run Carlotta through when she landed on his chest. But now it looks like that may happen, 'cause I think skinning that soldier struck a nerve. Ah well, Cthinde had it comin' hee hee.

Really great job on this chapter, I'm so looking forward to what happens next!

I was reading this last night, but I didn't get a chance to review it because of an interruption...

This was an enjoyable chapter with its clearly rendered action sequence and a dark gallows humor permeating Mason's observations of her erstwhile rescuer(s); it also looks as if Mason is not about to give up without a fight.

Plz UPDATE SOON!

Well, I`m glad you`re not dead. ;-)

cool chapter, you`re the best. thanks

Lol.

"... hottest piece of vomit-covered ** you've ever seen."

That's a classic.

The character dialogue, mid-paragraph, is still a bit disconcerting even after all this time.

I knew you weren't dead, but only because I mailed you. And just remember that's it's always better to be a procrastinator than a masturbator. Or is that the other way around.

I hope your muse starts kicking you in the ** so I can gets my fixin's.

Nice cliffy

Beautiful overture.

...mmhm...

I really wonder how you will get this into some kind of "lovestory".;-) So far the story is fun and I`m looking forward to new chapters.

NICE! PLEASE continue.

VERY GOOD!

Their back...now that was a rude awakening, seeing your buddy's get sliced opened! I'm just glad they go the survivors back, smart father for hiding his kids in those barrels. I really can't wait for the next chapter, I wanna know how they'll handle the Preds!

A good follow-up chapter.

Still enjoying the depth you're adding to both the Marines and the Yaujta. Though the lapse in judgment of sending everyone with motion trackers away is a bit of a stretch for me.

Anyway, great chapter, keep 'em coming. All that good stuff.

An interesting story and a nice way to get readers to read Quality of Resonance to get a rundown of why Cthinde is the way he is. I stopped taking my Ambien: So long, and thanks for all the fish!

You're at it again, Sealink. I would hate you for your talent if I didn't depend on it for one of the few instances I can get a hit of pure AVP gold.

Your initial characterizations of the Colonial Marines, as individuals and a group, are very well done. Usually the characterization, if any, of Colonial Marines is cookie-cutter at best. But the way your handled it was smooth as butter. Especially the line of Chantal's about the best oral in years. That was classic.

I'm also liking the deeper insight into the culture of the Hunting Clans. I tend to think of the nomadic Clans as a sub-culture, if you will, of the Yaujta. Especially since the Clan Leaders run their ships like their own individual fiefdoms.

Anyway, now for the bad part, which there's very little of. There were a few instances were the dialogue ran together and I could barely tell where one character's speech ended and another's began. Well, except when the dialogue was very short. But besides that everything was tight.

Keep up the great work!