u shud continue the story!!

you should certainly be proud of this! now, the only advice i can give you is...write another story, but LONGER!! i love you, youre totally the best! great work and keep it up!

i love your story!! you show the characters and their feelings really well and i love the way you write things!! thats all i can say, really, is wonderful job! lol
=D

aw, how sad!! i love your writing technique though. its very descriptive. certainly keep up the good work!

Pretty good, but it would have been better if the chapters were more lengthy or if you combined the several short chapters into a few long chapters.

don't tell me that's it!
it's soo sweet but there has to be more! more!
please?

wahoo! she woke up is ok and now they're gonna party till who knows when! I LOVED THE STORY!

THE END? NO! It must go on! Like Yuki waking up maybe? (>.

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG! UPDATE! YAY! TOHRU IS AWAKE! YUKI WAKE UP NOW! (>_

Light: s-she woke up?? *runs and hugs you* SHE WOKE UP! waho! YES!

Evil: shut up your embarassing yourself *bows to author* sorry bout her...shes just happy

Light: dang yes I am! hope you update soon! but don't stress yourself out about it!

This is good! please update soon!

aw this is soo sad. poor Yuki-kun and Tohru...aw i want her to get better! dont let her die!

light: wahh! *cries* tohru your killing everybody!! espcially me! please wake up! *jumps out window to roof*
evil: *shakes head* that idiot...light says she loves the story and can't wait till you update again
light: but please take your time all the same!

O.o this was so sweet! >.< i loved it!

love and huggles
asan-chan

wow! Shigure has a serious side! lol! teehee! update soon!
huggles
asan-chan