good story. though the ending with her crying about her father was good for another chapter but she shouldn't feel sad or guilty about heck she shouldn't feel anything at all.

good story.

Rachel shouldn't feel bad. Trigon got what he deserved. Anyway, great story.

The ending was kinda like play by play but also the concept was great. Like it's all over and she got the guy. :) *group hug*. But all in all a great stroy. It was a good idea and you played it out really well. Oh and dont worry about the romance thing to me it's way better than anything I could have written. I suck at romance.
Peace

yay i love
A+

oh im so sad that it's over!! but i really think that you should do a sequel! like have michael come back or maybe have that mysterious trigon really didn't die thing...but yu should give it some thought!

~fatcat~

It rocks, but you left it kind of on an edge at the end...
~SNICKS

I really like this story...it's good so,..don't have low self-esteem, it will make your world crash like mine...trust me

Hey! Sorry for not reviewing before. I haven't been getting any alerts from FF. Fantastic chapters. They were really great. Try to update again soon!

-Kool-Wolf

That Michael isn't what I would call boyfriend material.

I don't think it's been a disappointment at all!! I think it's a great story!
P.S. Happy Thanksgiving!

c'mo I'm dying to know what happens

Great chapter. I have a feeling that this storry is going to end soon. I hope not unless there's another killer trying to get Rae.

jeez i'm sorry. i wouldn't ignore you, or anyone for that matter, after they so nicely didn't hate me for ranting at them.
why did i think that was rape? because before that he was like, flirting sort of, with her. and then he says 'something i wanted for a long time' and after the knowledge that they dated it seemed like he was after...something other than a friendly hug. and then she wakes up and thinks 'how could i let him do that to me' it didn't sound like she was talking about being beaten.
i guess after everything that seemed to ponit to that in the chapter, and just how michael is(a jerk) i just assumed. my apologies.
okay, now for yoyr review. that was cool. i can't belive it's almost over. dude, it's wierd, i've been reading for a while and it's already ending?! you update so fast. wish i could do that. (i take a month per chapter...)
i love what happened to michael. i mean the whole scene is great. the way it played out, with gar chasing her there, and tackling her, then michael showing up and the fight, it was all cool. and the killing michael was awesome.
she could totally live through that though, i think. being shot i mean. train stations aren't usually totally empty,so there would be others there so she could get help. and she didn't get shot right in the stomach..so she could live...right?
(did you know that being shot in the stomach hurts the most and takes the longest to kill?)

oh, nice cliffy!! but i hate it at the same time!! but that was a quick update! awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter!

~fatcat~