yep, yep, yue no miko's right! you should put that stuff in Kami To Ki! It's really nice, I love all your poems *kneels down* Pls! Write more!

"ourselves believing

that this is love . . ." -my favorite line _. Sounds more Weiss Kreuz than Tokyo Babylon to me, but then it's quite unusual for Weiss prose to be mentioning about angels and surreal images. I liked the way you stopped the poem from getting too surreal, by concluding it with real, human, mortal, physical etc. etc. images. Makes it more appealing, establishes that certain connection, like dreamy thoughts crashing back to earth eventually, which I think is appropriate for the theme of the poem. But then, I wouldn't really know. I guess it's just me.

Godbless. _

Hello! Yah, I finally came across this. Hey, it's really nice. Why don't you write one for Kami to Ki? Can you write something longer? I'd love that!

Please *turns into tadpole mode and looks at author with large, liquid eyes* Please? Ne? Ne?

Um...who among the four is that supposed to be?...pretty short (um, should I say obviously) and leaves everything to the imagination...

how sad *sniff* and sweet *sigh*

ah- that's really pretty... I like it