Poor Marco... and your added ending made me laugh.

KP

Aww... no sequel? Too bad; it would have had a nice start. Anyway, well written, and just a thought... old stories can always be picked up again. Dont' want to bother you, but let you know you did really great writing this one. Michelle

I like the second ending better... bwahahaha! *just kidding*

No continuations? ::pouts:: But I wanna know how they got Marco's name cleared, and busted the Yeerks, and what are Cassie and Ax like?

MORE!

ooookay. It built up to a great story though. Too bad you didnt continue it!

Why won't u wright a conyinuation! It could be like...Cassie trusts Marco but Ax dosn't really. They try to hide Marco but the yeerks trak him down over and over and it finally comes down to Ax choosing wheather he should save Marco's life or not. Plus, Marco is begging Ax to kill him because Marco believes the it's to late and the yeerks will find out the secret no matter how hard the animorphs try to hide him.

I really liked it. I actually like the cliffhanger better than having a continuation. Good job.

I thought it was a good short story

I'm looking forward to your next one! :)

No continuations? But I Wanna know the SECRET! Ohhh... Good story...

Cool.

What? No sequel? You're evil. I at least have to know what the secret was. If Jake and Cassie are still together. If they had spaghetti or mac and cheese for dinner. Just tell me!

Good writing, but once you noticed that the plot is ... well, how shall I put it ... very much the Prisoner of Azkaban, you can't concentrate on anything else, any more. But I like your image of Jake. I don't like him very much any more, you know. Also I like the Rachel & Marco connection. And I think Rachel is a better left-over than Tobias, although Rachel would be the better one to sacrifice (is anybody able to translate my babbling into real english?)

But on the whole it's really very PoA. Don't know if that was forced or just happened. Anyway, I believe it's some good writing .. uhm have I already said that?

Rach