 DragonRider8 2006-10-02 . chapter 2Brilliant, as always! If you that's how long it took for you to make this chapter as perfect as it was, then take your time. I'd rather wait a while for a chapter that blows my mind (much like this one did!) then have a new chapter in a day that's a dissapointment (not that you've ever given me ANY dissapointment!) Also, I hope your mum and your aunt feel better soon.
~DragonRider8 |
 MagicSwede1965 2006-08-01 . chapter 1I get to review first! :) I can't tell you if Sawyer is OOC, but I do know that your writing sketches a very good mental picture of the character: the way he drops his G's ("lyin'", "somethin'", etc.), his wacky nicknames for other castaways. Really nice work on this one! |