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Reviews for: Daring to Trust
DragonRider8
2006-10-02 . chapter 2
Brilliant, as always! If you that's how long it took for you to make this chapter as perfect as it was, then take your time. I'd rather wait a while for a chapter that blows my mind (much like this one did!) then have a new chapter in a day that's a dissapointment (not that you've ever given me ANY dissapointment!) Also, I hope your mum and your aunt feel better soon.
~DragonRider8
DragonRider8
2006-08-01 . chapter 1
excellent work! you portrayed Sawyer really well! i can't wait for Kate's chapter and could you PLEASE make it sooner than next week! i REALLY want to know what happens!
~DR8
MagicSwede1965
2006-08-01 . chapter 1
I get to review first! :) I can't tell you if Sawyer is OOC, but I do know that your writing sketches a very good mental picture of the character: the way he drops his G's ("lyin'", "somethin'", etc.), his wacky nicknames for other castaways. Really nice work on this one!
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