I love love love this pairing and this story! You are a genius!

Nice Story!:D

and to the guy below, i think its because how Shikamaru said that he just wanted a normal girl, not too pretty not too ugly, so he was like saying she was perfect for him? IDK XD another chapter plz? :D

so cute :) ! Totally a Shikatema fan now ;) although i didnt really like the whole youre not beutiful but you arent ugly line, the rest of the story made up for it :) I really like the "your not troublesome" and the soft kiss *awwwwwwwww* :D

I BET he's gonna propose!

This certainly caught my attention. I think it was well-made. I was slightly disappointed that it's a one-shot because I would have liked a continuation (I was left curious regarding their next meeting). Though, I must say, that you chose to end it at the right time too. It might have been too long if you hadn't cut it there.

This was extraordinary; I loved your characterization of both Shikamaru and Temari, along with the premise to begin with. I think you brought out a believable version of events for the two of them, rather than the oversaturated fluff that most writers come up with.

It was really refreshing, and I enjoyed it immensely. :)

Wah!This one made me tear up all of a sudden and it wasn't even a sad story!It was awesome angst!You are one of the few authors I've read to make angst work for them in such an awesome way!Loved this!

Loved it!

might sound weird, but this story made med shiver. I really liked it. the feelings felt really real...and now I' strutting off to see what more you've done...:)

I really enjoyed this, so I'm definitely going to check out the other works that you've written. This was really enjoyable and gah, I really liked it.

Love it. TuT

I adore this story, thank you!

Loved the ending!

Somehow I can see this as very realistic. If anything happened between them, this would seem like a likely situation. I freaking loved it and it made me very happy. Great job!

bravo!

very cute : )

wat was tha question tho, cos i dont get it. sry i may be ignorant, buh i cant help i really lyk a lot orf ur stories