Where's Dib? There should be more Dib in this story. What if Clair had Dib growing out of the back of her head? Okay, I'll admit that that's rediculous, but I had to say it. All I'm saying is, Zim couldn't do ANYTHING without Dib noticing. I mean, what's Dib doing this whole time? I'm confused. please explain in the next chapter what Dib's doing.

Well i for one would like to read more. it fullfills my need for zim, you are a good writer! in my opinion, as long as i feel like im watching an episode then its good. and your good.

i even laugh alot in your stories. I am Pinn Stripes i write Beetljuice, pokemon and zim fics.

I still have a few more days until i can submit but oh well. and im actually looking for inspiration fo rmy own zim fic. i got a character just no story really. anyways, i added your fics to my faves, so id love to see a continuation of your zim fics!

Oh! No! You have to finish this! It's really good! If all fails, I have some never failing tips that'll help... it'll involve taking down this story and revamping it a bit... anyway, I do hope you'll continue it soon, though. It's really a great story... I love it *so* much and I hope you will write more!

woah... ::grabs Allicat by the collar:: You. Have. Got. To. Finish. This. Story. Soon. YOU HEAR ME? o.O this is soooo good and I want to read MORE!

hmm, looks good so far...

Wa, coolness! Please continue soon, I'd love to see the rest sometime soon.

:-) wow. Sounds really good. Definitely not OOC. Very interesting. More!