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| Chelsee6 2007-03-20 ch 14,  | abusevicki, brilliant story, more Huxon would have been good but oh well. one glaring inconsistency though, unless it's common place for people to have two engagements. you mentioned in chapter one that rachel was smithy's fiancee, then in chapter fouteen they got engaged and married. thought you'd like to know. other than that, great fic, and i'm sorry i didn't read it before. |
| Skate-815 2007-01-09 ch 14, | abuseaw tis v good, cant believe tis the last chapter tho :( yay sp :D and sz |
| starfish saver 2006-12-31 ch 14, | abuseo god that was amazing! i seriously reckon this is my favourite fic, have loved all of it! sorry i didnt review for a while, the net went stupid. but i LOVED this fic!! well done :D sarah xoxo |
| Lornz 2006-12-26 ch 14, | abuseAnd for xmas ...my author alert crashes again! Lol! Aw! Great ending! They had a baby :D Loved it! Am going to miss reading tis fic as well! x |
| Skate-815 2006-12-22 ch 13, | abuseaw szness! i love zain :D:D |
| Skate-815 2006-12-22 ch 12, | abusedie cow die :Dlol yes ive un converted again, lol woo Zain/Sarah! ud soon |
| SuperBex 2006-12-21 ch 13, | abuseaw! So cute! Glad there's a kinda happy ending, sad about what happened to Zain's sister tho. Update soon! CSI Buddy X |
| emma 2006-12-20 ch 11, anon. | abuseno is he okay? |
| Lornz 2006-12-20 ch 13, | abuseAw! Bless them! Glad they've sorted everything out! Look foward to the epilogue! And thanks for updating so quickly, gives me a break from my delightful english essay! |
| Lornz 2006-12-20 ch 12, | abuseMeh! You killed her :O ! I will forgive you seeing as you started this fic back in the days when I wasn't so keen on her myself! Great Chap! Thought Sarah/Zain were really sweet! Look forward to the next chap! x |
| thebillforever 2006-12-20 ch 12, | abuseThis is gr8 vikki... i meant to review this fic from like the beginning but never got round to it... the entire fic is fab... yay she's dead, she's dead, she's dead... (As you know i'm definately not a Kristen fan lmao) x Leanne x |
| SuperBex 2006-12-20 ch 12, | abuseOmg you killed Kristen! lol! I thought you liked her now!! Loved the cute SP stuff, obviously! Looking forward to Zain's explanation... Bex x |
| Skate-815 2006-12-20 ch 10, | abuseaw poor zain, everyone hates him :(:( |
| Abi 2006-12-20 ch 12, anon. | abusedie Kristen! die Kristen! No affense to her fans or anything, but YIPPE! lol love it Vikki |
| Lornz 2006-12-18 ch 11, | abuse:O It can't be Zain! No! Look forward to the next chap - hope my Zain is alright!! "Phil, how are you feeling?" Jack asked. "Like I've been shot." Phil joked. Lol! Made me laugh that bit! x |