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emeraldvanvanessa
2008-04-24
ch 8,
abuseso good
Golden Sakura Dragon
2008-04-20
ch 8,
abuseOMG i absolutly loved it except the part where shika gets sick but everything else was great
LixxyChan
2008-01-01
ch 8,
abuseAw. Kawaii...OOC, but very cute...
I like the couple, you're pretty good at writing, but there were bits which didn't make sense.
4/5

LixxyChan
RAWR.Im.A.Monster
2007-12-01
ch 8,
abuseaw! -giggles- that was amazingly perfectly adorably cute! ^^ I love your story, words can't explain how much!! HEHE! The last line of thestory put me in a fit of giggles ^^ YOU'RE AN AMAZING WRITER :] Don't ever stoppy :]! Loved this, keepy up la good workk!!
Hoshi no Sakura
2007-08-10
ch 8,
abuseThis has been the best ShikaxSaku story I've read so far. I laughed, I cried. I felt torn apart, but it ended nicely. Great work.
Nemi-the-fallen-angel
2007-08-03
ch 8,
abuseoh yayez sakura kickes some serious ** and everyone knows it ... CHA!
Starlight - Wild Koneko
2007-07-12
ch 8,
abuse*laughs* that's so sweet, it's an awsome story. Now I'm suddenly iching for more Shikamaru Sakura stories *grins* Thanks for writing it
sassyanimegrl
2007-06-30
ch 8,
abuseawesome story! I believe I cried at some point lol definitely one of my favorites...keep up the awesome work...take care and later dayz...
nwfairy
2007-06-20
ch 8,
abuseAw so cute ^^

wonderful story ^^

Slug beats snake ^^
Dolphingirl32173
2007-06-14
ch 8,
abuseSarah: aw! sweet! WAY TO GO SAKURA! KICK OROCHIMARU-TEME'S ** AGAIN AND AAGAIN!
Orochimaru: do i have no fans?
Sarah: oh, you have fans alright. i just don't read the stories they write about you. you're wierd.
Orochimaru: how so?
Sarah: well, you got that uber-longue snake tongue; you always look like ya just woke up from death, your so pale; i don't like people with snake-eyes. cat-eyes are okay, but not snake-eyes. oh the list oculd go on and on.
Orochimaru: shut up.
Kabuto: well, i'm a fan of Orochimaru-sama's.
Sarah: yeh, and you betrrayed your home country in becoming loyal to him. and i'm DEFINITELY NOT your fan. i hate traiters. Sasuke at least returend for his due punishment. ... why are you two here anyways? i thought i had the others promise to keep you out.
Orochimaru: oh, they were FALLING at my feet.
Sarah: gr. *smacks Orochimaru with chakra filled smack* get out of my room!
Tsunade: what's goi-... OROCHIMARU! WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE?!
Everyone else: *run in* OROCHIMARU!
Sarah: well, i better go; i like watching these kind of battles. *takes huge bowl of popcorn and goes to watch the fun*
Serenity Fey
2007-06-12
ch 8,
abuseAw... That was cute... but the sickness... *shudders* Scary-ness. Awesoe fic, tho. Loved it!

~Serenity Fey~
xXxTsukuyomixXx
2007-06-02
ch 8,
abuse*sniff* I love you for writing this!! I think I cried at some point lol, go shikasaku!! geez I really need to write one..
Goatis
2007-05-24
ch 8,
abuseGreat story (though I don't think it was very characteristic of Orochimaru to give her the true cure when he was dying at her hands - I would think that he would be more likely to give her a fake cure or laugh at her while he died). I liked the fact that she killed him though - showing that she'd exceeded even Sasuke and Naruto's strength. And the ending is so sweet!
SakuraRoxMySox
2007-05-22
ch 8,
abuseyay! totally loved it!
YourAngelStandingBy
2007-04-09
ch 8,
abuseThis is the first time I've seen this pairing... I LIKE IT! It's awesome. Gaara and Sakura are still my favorites, but this was a nice change.

Great story!

-Angel
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