This story was totally awesome! I have read it like a trillion times!

So the adult Marty lives in his parents old home? Just like in the original part 1 script where Marty and his parents lived in the same house his mom lived in with her parents.

The whole living in the water conversation made me think of something. I wonder if some people in 2016 actually live underwater. Like in cities protected from water pressure by glass domes. I mean, people used to believe that they'll end up living on the moon in the future.

Wow! The Marty's are a little too much alike, but other than that, the story's awesome!!

I'm pretty sure Hip Hop came around the same time as Rap.

Yeah, rap is crap. A lot of young people still listen to Rock today, that is if you call that emo-goth garbage 'Rock.' I'm sure there will be another crappy type of Rock in the next decade.

You really like Michael J. Fox, don't you?

What the heck is condescending mean?

Now this could sound like a future version of the Alternate trilogy that took place in the parker universe.

good story. too much embracing. i know its a friendly thing and all like family love but its still too much. I'm tired of reading about 2 people embracing. keep writing.
bye.
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Good job. I liked this story.I found it rather interesting to see what the two tenns from the future thought of the past.

your made marty senior cry isnt that a little out of character i mean i dont think something like that would make him cry

Nice chapter, I think i can see where this is going.

Pretty gnarly, you have some pretty good skill with writing! ;) Please continue!

Alsome please continue!!