Nice job with Valerie's life and character. :D Great scenes, especially with Danny. (Maybe her subconscious is trying to tell her something?)

Interesting portrayal of Valerie.

that was good...It was her mind trying to tell her something..

What pairing is 'Swagger Bishie'?

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When I saw this come up in my email i was like wtf? I thought you gave up on writing fanfics or something like that. . .oh well, guess I thought wrong (you seriously can't get rid of the fanfic obsession, i know this because i've tried to xD)

Anyhoo, Back to the review. Favorites automatically of course! This story was excellent, I loved the flow of writing and everything!
Great job kis!
~Symomo (STFU xP)

Very nice. I can't say I see any problems; it looks like this story made it good! ...Did that make any sense whatsoever?

Very nice. I loved how you incorporated the dream, and how (like most dreams) it just becomes fuzzy and diffused. Maybe if she could remember her dreams, she could put two and two together.

Very nicely done, excellent pace, well written. Faving.

Absolutely amazing I wish that it wasnt a long shot and that you would carry it on! Defintly going into favs!

Awesome! :D Love the choas and madness of it all, right up until the end! definately faving this, and I can't wait to see your other stuff!

wow. that was really powerful.

loved it!

Excellent one-shot!
I love the interaction between Danny and Valerie.

Adding this to favs.

the ending coght me completlee bi surprize. i luvd the imagry. the dialog was good as well. 10 out uv 10.

Excellent story. So, maybe, Val, at a subconscious level, recognizes Danny in his Phantom's ID.

Keep the good writing.

Wonderful dreamscape, I've always found it hard to write that sort of stream-of-consciousness stuff. Good job on the constant shifting of Danny's form, very crazy-making for Val. And a lovely bit of family bonding there at the end, I've always thought that Damon was a great Dad.

Saramis, amazing work once again. I needs to add you as one of my favorite authors ^.^

Anyway, you spelt Valerie's name like 'Valeria'

"“Get out!” Valeria screamed, walking toward the window to shut it. “Get away from me.”"

Anyway, amazing story, I can never stop envying you for writing such awesome stuff >.<

Keep up the awesome work :]