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| Coco-Minu 2008-03-14 ch 1, | abusePerverted and very VERY wrong. But that's just why I like this story. :D |
| The Cookie Thief 2007-06-14 ch 1, | abuseHeh...I liked this! Peace out! The Cookie Thief |
| Earelen 2007-03-12 ch 1, | abuseWe should be thankful that these two didn't actually get together - the world wouldn't be safe from their combined ambition. That being said, I thoroughly enjoyed this little vignette - it's wonderfully well-written. You're in a whole different league from 99% of the poorly worded tripe on fanfic sites! I *love* this particular line: "He suddenly notices how much closer Azula is than she was a mere minute ago, and wonders what they teach at the Firebending Academy these days that allows a young woman to move twenty feet without lifting a foot or being noticed." What a terrifically evocative way to describe both Azula's grace of movement, and Zhao's almost primal reaction to her. Just beautiful writing! Now I shall have to read more of your stuff! |
| mentallyinsanepyress 2006-11-08 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good! It would be awesome if you actually made a full-length story on the Zhao/Azula pairing! Your right. It doesn't get enough credit. ^_^ |
| AtlantianLaw 2006-10-17 ch 1, | abuseNice. I can't say I'm a fan of either of the characters, but I like it very much. |
| WerewolfCookie 2006-10-04 ch 1, | abuseWho woulda thought that the villain of Book 1 and the villain of Book 2 would be so perfect together? If he were still alive I would ship this. Definitely. |
| Jen-Bot 2006-10-01 ch 1, | abuseYou get majore props for writting this, the coulpling was ingenius and they were both so in character. FAVORITES! |
| dragongal150 2006-09-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseI said it once and I'll say it again. That is just plain wrong! |
| DemonCaster 2006-09-25 ch 1, | abuseThat was hot! lol Short, sweet, and to the point. Well done. -DemonCaster |
| Clone Number 5 2006-09-24 ch 1, | abuseHow did I miss this? It's absolutely beautiful! And it's so sexy and sad. This pairing is one of my favorites. Thank you for sharing! |
| Spleefmistress 2006-09-24 ch 1, | abuseHot! |
| Sir Francis Drake's Heir 2006-09-22 ch 1, | abuseYea! I luz Azhaola! |
| Danielle 2006-08-29 ch 1, anon. | abuse! I feel the same way you do about the pairing! Can you write a novel-length story?? i luv this paring i think they are so right for each other...except i hate Azula and kinda like Zhao... so yeah... there arn't enough Zhao pairings... >. |
| Mirage992 2006-08-02 ch 1, | abuseWow. You know, if Zhao came back, I would become a Zhao/Azula shipper. Short, sweet, and to the point. good job! ~Mirage992 |
| TheUndertone 2006-08-02 ch 1, | abuseThat is freaKin awesome/hilarious |