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Coco-Minu
2008-03-14
ch 1,
abusePerverted and very VERY wrong.

But that's just why I like this story. :D
The Cookie Thief
2007-06-14
ch 1,
abuseHeh...I liked this!

Peace out!
The Cookie Thief
Earelen
2007-03-12
ch 1,
abuseWe should be thankful that these two didn't actually get together - the world wouldn't be safe from their combined ambition. That being said, I thoroughly enjoyed this little vignette - it's wonderfully well-written. You're in a whole different league from 99% of the poorly worded tripe on fanfic sites! I *love* this particular line:
"He suddenly notices how much closer Azula is than she was a mere minute ago, and wonders what they teach at the Firebending Academy these days that allows a young woman to move twenty feet without lifting a foot or being noticed."
What a terrifically evocative way to describe both Azula's grace of movement, and Zhao's almost primal reaction to her. Just beautiful writing!
Now I shall have to read more of your stuff!
mentallyinsanepyress
2006-11-08
ch 1,
abuseThat was really good! It would be awesome if you actually made a full-length story on the Zhao/Azula pairing! Your right. It doesn't get enough credit. ^_^
AtlantianLaw
2006-10-17
ch 1,
abuseNice. I can't say I'm a fan of either of the characters, but I like it very much.
WerewolfCookie
2006-10-04
ch 1,
abuseWho woulda thought that the villain of Book 1 and the villain of Book 2 would be so perfect together? If he were still alive I would ship this. Definitely.
Jen-Bot
2006-10-01
ch 1,
abuseYou get majore props for writting this, the coulpling was ingenius and they were both so in character.

FAVORITES!
dragongal150
2006-09-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseI said it once and I'll say it again. That is just plain wrong!
DemonCaster
2006-09-25
ch 1,
abuseThat was hot! lol
Short, sweet, and to the point.
Well done.

-DemonCaster
Clone Number 5
2006-09-24
ch 1,
abuseHow did I miss this? It's absolutely beautiful! And it's so sexy and sad. This pairing is one of my favorites. Thank you for sharing!
Spleefmistress
2006-09-24
ch 1,
abuseHot!
Sir Francis Drake's Heir
2006-09-22
ch 1,
abuseYea! I luz Azhaola!
Danielle
2006-08-29
ch 1, anon.
abuse! I feel the same way you do about the pairing! Can you write a novel-length story?? i luv this paring i think they are so right for each other...except i hate Azula and kinda like Zhao... so yeah... there arn't enough Zhao pairings... >.
Mirage992
2006-08-02
ch 1,
abuseWow. You know, if Zhao came back, I would become a Zhao/Azula shipper. Short, sweet, and to the point. good job!
~Mirage992
TheUndertone
2006-08-02
ch 1,
abuseThat is freaKin awesome/hilarious
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