Incredibly written. I remember reading the original story, Gem Scouts and Sailor Star, when was still around and loved it then. I like how they were changed from being Crystal Green, Blue, Red, and Orange to Sailors Emerald, Sapphire, Ruby, and Amethyst (nice touch as well), and even adding Beryl as a fifth senshi.

The only things I recommend improving on is the grammar and sentence structure because I had to read over some paragraphs and sentences a few times to understand what was really being said. Microsoft Word has a spelling and grammar check for that kind of stuff.

Other than that, I really enjoyed reading this, and I was also wondering where The Amazon Senshi disappeared to. I saw it on here a couple months ago but haven't been able to find it.

Wow, this story is amazing! I was rooting for all the Crystal Senshi here. ^^ You did an excellent job, and I can't wait to read more. Please keep it up, and drop by my stories anytime. ^_~v

This is as good as the first one! Just a wee suggestion though, please add more breaks in the larger parts of the text! It will be easier for people to read! Apart from that, a brilliant fic!

Whoa. That was a read and a half and you certainly deserve more reviews than you have. My god that was amazing, the sheer emotion throughout the entire fic, I was yoyoing up and down. Marvellous. I admit I had my reservations about 'Crystal Senshi' but gee you picked up slack! My favourite character was Artemis and my favourite part was just after Luna died. He was just so...perfect. All your emotions rang clear and it had a sense of dread not one episode could match.
The only thing I have to complain about is your paragraphing, its a shocker! The runons! *shudders* My suggestion is to go back through your first series and add a few more page breaks and reupload. So when others such as myself were redirected from Return of the Crystal Senshi they won't be put off.
Cheers!

Love the story...keep up the good work^_^

This story sounds good but here is some advice

SPACE YOUR LINES!!