Hey, that's nice. I like the development in their friendship, since it's sometimes very rocky. This was indeed a very interesting one-shot, but please watch your grammar and edit your work. =) :D

--DI

im gonna be picky cause i know you wont mind me being picky =P

when you do dialogue, you shouldnt put spaces between the quotation marks and the first word within your dialogue unless followed by a '.

the sentence: "If my ex didn’t even no anything about me…not even that my favourite colour was pink! Off course I had to dump him! He wasn’t even after my personality or anything"

i THINKthink can be better written as: "If my ex doesn’t even know anything about me -- not even that my favourite colour is pink -- of course I have to dump him! He wasn’t even after my personality or anything"

and i understand that this was a quick write, but you should still be watching your grammar, girl, tskk! (i know im being very hypocritical beause i have awful grammar)

other than that, liked the whole sora outcast feeling thing. kinda makes her a very relatable person, dont you think? =) mimi's reaction i found was very much in her character. keep it up babes.

Ohh... Nice. Great to hear from you.

Sora and Mimi were going through the same thing as mising eachother. Yay their friends again. I like this oneshot a lot its cute.