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Shaithan
2008-02-14 . chapter 1
Kodachi the magical girl. And her aligator as the loyal magical girl advisor.
This promises so much fun.
Will other deities appear here? For example Thor who hunts Loki. Or will the Sailor Scouts and Kodachi and her magical girls have to deal with Loki without help?
I think this will become very interesting.
Hopefully you find time to write a second chapter.
Lee - Luthorne - Dis
2007-12-26 . chapter 1
Huh, intriguing. Be interesting to see where this goes, if you still plan on continuing it. Don't think I've run across one where Ranma winds up with a team of magical girls competing with the Sailor Senshi...a few where he winds up in charge of the Sailor Senshi, but not actually with a rival (if not exactly evil) team of sorts. Be fun to see what'd happen if they ran into the Sailor Scouts.
Fury
2007-09-05 . chapter 1
This is going to be great, I just know it.
Paver83
2006-08-02 . chapter 1
This... is original. At least as far as I know. I'm VERY interested to see where you take this. I can easily see the various fiancees still duking it out, unless their respective deities really lower a mental boom.

I think I would have give Ranma to Coyote, but that's personal preference on my part.

You decided to go with the extra delusional version of Kodachi who doesn't 'get' the curse despite seeing it in action. I can see why you did so if this is going to be a heavily comedic story, but I have a preference for a less delusional Black Rose. Spider Queen. Whatever. Again, I suppose that's my preference.

Eagerly awaiting more! Thanks!
Upgrade
2006-08-02 . chapter 1
I'm not sure whether to groan or chuckle. Maybe both. :)
AshK
2006-08-02 . chapter 1
Interesting! I like it! Keep up the good work!

Sincerely,
AshK
kaztsar
2006-08-02 . chapter 1
You do know that Konatsu is a guy, right?
Dumbledork
2006-08-02 . chapter 1
HAHAHAHA this is rich. I simply LOVE it. This is one helluva original story. I want more... NO! I NEED more.
DarkJackel
2006-08-02 . chapter 1
Interesting though it seemed to go a little too quickly. The idea is certainly original but it felt a bit rushed. I'd have liked to see Kodachi's initial fight with the Senshi for example.

I look forward to seeing how this developes.

-_-Me-_-
aondehafka
2006-08-02 . chapter 1
Looking forward to more! The only thing I'd really ask is, could you use these circumstances to make Kodachi more chaotic but less actually crazy? I always feel sorry for her and like to see her get a better handle on life, the universe, and everything.

One way to do this, of course, would be for the Avatars' personalities to change over time, developing similarities to their patron chaos deities. You don't have to take this too far, of course, and I'd advise against that anyway, but in moderation it seems to me like it could have some great potential.
TerraBull
2006-08-02 . chapter 1
I laughed a lot at this, and wondered how long it would be before Kodachi wanted a re-match from the Girls in Juuban.

Cont when you can.
Innortal
2006-08-02 . chapter 1
A great read as always.
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