it was so good i loved this story :D bery good it was sad a nit tho lol but i like sad stuff lol so WOOP very good lol

excuse me can i please suggest a story about a larxene and zexion fic that: zexy will be jelous at larx and marluxy and U do the rest, thx thx!

You.Are.GOD! I really love it about the double life of larxene, I feel bad for zexion my fan-fic's are so OOC so I bet thats kinda why I'm not so popular. So anyway keep up the good work your awesome. ^-\\

hey great story!^.^ and thanks for writeing it this pairing needs more love!

This story is great so far. But you made a mistake: Lexaeus's Somebody name is spelt Aeleus, not Eleus. There's an "A" in his name, ne? Apart from that, I love this fic. There's hardly any LarxeneZexion fics. Even though you said in the first chapter you don't do romance, you're doing a great job.

was the name of that chapter supposed to remind your readers(if they know) about the german song about war...or something...99 Luff Balloons? i know that song from german class.

Bravo! Bravo! Congratz!

I would say that was a nice ending, but you know, it ended with death. . . Ahem. But I really enjoyed reading it. I only wish I could have reveiwed sooner. But it was beautifully written nonetheless. Perhaps I could say it was a sad yet fittingly perfect ending for the two?

Hopefully, Nobody's Music can live up to this awesome story.

This was one of my favorite stories, and I always looked forward to my alerts. Though, I have to wonder. Whatever happened to Cloud?

Not really sure what to say,but i'm sad that it's over.It's a great story even with the sad ending.

Man, I'm so sad that this is story is over...it has honestly been one of the best stories I have ever read on this site, and I'm sorry to see it go. On the other hand, I can just read your other stuff...but still...

Oh well, nice work!

Wow...I haven't reviewed in a while! My birthday is on monday. Well, at one point in the chapter it actually sounded like it was part of a novel. It's really good. Though...I think you shouldn't have rushed through Sora's entrance and Axel's betreyal. Maybe give them both like 2 paragraphs. Kinda left a leaf-covered pit in the forest for me.

Oh, nice chapters...it's not over yet, right?

Well I have followed this story faithfully and I am glad I did. I can't wait to see how it's going to turn out. By the way I really enjoy the way you do the narrations, especially the one in the beginning of this chapter.

That was a good chapter.

I hope Larxene and Zexion make it out OK.

Hm. Kinda wished that Lexaeus and Vexen get out as well... Poor guys. Personally I'd rather not see any of the Castle Oblivion Org members get killed... with the possible exception of Marluxia but that's me.

Keep it up!

See ya later.

I love this story! I've always been a fan of the Zexion/Larxene pairing, and this is well written stuff. I've even come up with a few theories for what will happen at hte end.

1. Zexion and Larxene will die, but Zexion's cloning machine will create replicas of them.

2. Zexion was the one that hired Cloud, who will save Larxene.