|Reviews for Wyatt and Chris meets the Latter Day boys!|
| Christopher lover 10/8/11 . chapter 10
Y y y does no one ever finish a good story?
I mean dis is really good! So is ur stories
tale of 2 chris's
Shock or surprise ( u should really really reallly really rite dat sequel plzz plzzz whoever it was they had a really good idea I mean chris doesn't have 2 cme bak cause he wants 2 maybe he got hit ad vic can't heal ad orbed him 2 da only people he knew could ad they wouldn't let then leave again EVERYONE was up in the attic ad they got sucked in2 a Portal ad in2 they past or somefin but plzz tier one)
| animegirl03 5/19/11 . chapter 10
good chapter update soon :)
| j 1/6/11 . chapter 10
This is a really cool idea for a story. i thought it was awesome that you had chris vanquish a demon that was threatening wyatt by calling for it's heart- ripping it's heart out. that was awesome.
i thought it was cool that you had chris bitten by a rat demon and wyatt has to save him.
but what does any of this have to do with the 'last days' story line that you said the story is about in your summary. and there's no belthazor either.
maybe you mixed up your stories and or summaries?
| j 1/6/11 . chapter 9
chris has been wanting wyatt to explain himself and make up and apologize.
wyatt apologizes. wyatt explains. wyatt declares his undying love and would die for him.
Chris turns him away and acts like a whiny, selfish, self serving, bitch- only ever concerned about how things affect him...
at least you're consistent in the ways you portray your chris characters in all your stories.
what is this story supposed to be about. 9 chapters and you've only had them meet the 'last days' guy 1 time. but you say the story is about the 'last days' guys and wyatt and chris in the summary.
you have it listed belthazor and chris.
but all it is so far is wyatt and chris _ which i love-when chris isn't a bitch.
so is the summary wrong or is it just taking a really long time getting there? wyatt hasn't kissed one of the 'last days' guys yet and that's in your summary as well.
| j 1/6/11 . chapter 8
(What hurt Chris the most was that Wyatt barely pays any attention to him anymore in a civilised human manner. Let alone sexually, the way he used to do when they were alone. Just over a week ago, Wyatt would wink and make slightly more than suggestive gestures to Chris, indicating that he wanted to go somewhere a little more private. Now though, nothing, nadda, zilch. It was as if Wyatt had been turned into a robot.)_
geez, maybe it has something to do with you turning down his wedding proprosal and letting him think that you didn't love him- because you only told him no and offered no further explanation...like yes- you'd like to marry him; but in real life we can't get married- but i'll always be with you, etc...
(or maybe he understood why Chris said no and came to apologise.)
what makes you think he undertood why you said no- when you never bothered to explain yourself- and you're supposed to be the god damned empath- aren't you supposed to be the one to figure this shit out.
"Cause…because the time isn't right Wy." He said looking at Wyatt
angst/adventure_did you maybe mean to add humor or crack-comedy_ because then some of this really stupid stuff would make more sense- if i realized you were trying to be funny or sardonic
| j 1/6/11 . chapter 6
again- you have chris an empath- and you have him not knowing what is wrong with wyatt. can you understand why i said you're writing him like a retard?
you even had chris think that he hoped and dreamed for the day that wyatt would ask to marry him and/or spend the rest of his life with him_ and then you have chris say no- without offering any further explanation_ again- it should be obvious why one would think he was a retard.
| j 1/6/11 . chapter 5
wow- a story with a retard chris. if he's supposed to be a god damned empath- why didn't he feel why wyatt was acting the way he did- because he didn't want chris to think he had anything to do with this guy. and if chris was so worried about this guy- why did chris let him leave- especially if he knew that it was a case of mistaken identity and he was in pain_ and chris yelled at wyatt- the guy who didn't know what was going on- while chris did know what was going on and just let it happen.
plus why did chris even bring him home. you've already set up the precedent that they put to sleep than memory dust then send home innocents. yet you had chris not use memory dust and orb him to the hotel- you had chris bring him to his home and put him to sleep?
your chris characters are ALWAYS so fucked up!
| S 6/8/10 . chapter 10
A little confused but love the story anyway. You seriously have to update though.
| I-Love-Trunks1 12/28/09 . chapter 10
I really love this story!
I hope Chris and Wyatt end up together again soon
Cant wait for more!
| bob 4/8/09 . chapter 10
dude, you gotta update soon
| winta 6/17/08 . chapter 1
I want to know what happened next? I waiting for you finish until end of the story. It's has been long time waiting
| winta 4/4/08 . chapter 10
I like your story. It's great.
I'm want to know what happened next? Can you write the story now?
| angeleyenc 3/31/08 . chapter 10
plz update! i like it so far!
| jane 3/24/08 . chapter 10
liked it alot, the suspense is killing me , plz update it soon
| Zacarane 3/24/08 . chapter 10
Liked it as always. Please continue soon.