I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Hey I love this story! It one of the best ones I've read! Yay Mamoru and Usagi!

Belle

Wow. This was really good, and long too...for a one-shot anyways... I loved it! I'm not much of a Mamoru fan, but you have to admit this fic was good!

Aw, that was sweet and sad...welpz, byez.

-Anime Goddess-

i think this was the cutest story minus a few parts but still cute keep up the good work, damn i sound like a teacher, i hate when i do that.keep on writing! Ba Bye

*blinks* Are you serious? This is your FIRST fic? You gotta be kidding. This is a wonderful piece of work, and it's refreshing to see an author who knows how to use spell check AND grammar check! It takes most authors, including me, until at least fic number 3 to get a piece this good! Brava!

Outstanding!

that was wonderful. very touching. for a first you did a great job.

That was sooooo goood! I love it when the good guys get hurt! (Though I don't know why...I think it's cuz of the whole death-love-Romeo-Juliet thing...)It was GREAT, GREAT, GREAT! Keep Writing!

I like. I think this was a very strong first fanfic and I look forward to reading more of your work.

B

Very sweet.

Oh yeah! My first fic is a go! I am feeling the rush! Woo! Hmmm, I seem to have the munchies. See ya later.