 Kay8abc 2009-06-21 . chapter 3Awesome fic, I hope you continue it. I like the insight into Shego's past. I am curious about the dreams that she has been having. I wonder what really happened to Kim if the dream is in some way truthfull.
-Kate |
 Emziiee-xxx 2009-05-25 . chapter 3please carry on its a grreat story tho i lil sad :(
But I shall be brave :) |
 Durandan 2007-07-11 . chapter 3Good story, I'd really like to see where this is going. Please do continue. |
 Failte200 2007-04-18 . chapter 3Silently she hoped that the report would help push for the larger budget Global Justice needed.
Shouldn't that be "secretly"? If it weren't silent, would she "hope out loud"? Just sayin'.
There was no brining Kim back. - spell check AND beta missed that? Or is it as I've suspected - FFN DOES drop letters...
I'm three paragraphs in. Okay, I'll just read for effect now...
And... uhm... I don't like it much. Shego breaking into the Director's office - she's just TOO bad-ass. Like Superman - always the right superpower at the right time. And while I'm trying to figure out what's going on with Kim - now there's this Mantis/Emily woman. An ex-lover, too? And the fight... a dream? A memory? A flashback? I'm all confused...
A general hint - I know it's hard to keep who's feeling/doing/saying what clear when they're both women - but you need to try harder. Read your pronoun-laden sentences and SEE IF they could be POSSIBLY taken the wrong way - and if so, depending on how easy it was - fix it. |
 Caesardire 2007-04-17 . chapter 3Woah...
That was... sweetly sad. |
 creativetoo 2007-04-17 . chapter 3Interesting chapter. Shego's meeting with Doctor Director...and her...nightmare...about killing the woman she loved.
Can't wait for the next chapter. |
 In-betweens 2007-04-13 . chapter 2This was a great chapter. The beginning was written wonderfuly and it was vivid. Great detail in it. Glad that Shego's out of the hospital now and can try to make a life. Also glad that Mrs. Possible is helping her out.
I wonder where Shego's going to be living and what deal she strikes up. |
 In-betweens 2007-04-13 . chapter 1This is a very interesting start. I wonder what mission Kim had been on while in Germany and what went wrong. I also wonder who it was that saved Shego. It'd be interesting if it were Kim. Alive and not dead. I hope Shego can find something about herself that shows it is worth living life. Maybe Mrs. Possible can be the one to help her find that. |
 Caesardire 2007-04-10 . chapter 2Definately caught my atention. I really liked the first chapter, and this one was good too, with the bonding and all. It was... sweet X3
I shall anticipate your next chapter.
Kudos to you ^^ |
 creativetoo 2007-04-09 . chapter 2I like how you've got Shego and Kim's mom getting along so well, and I found it touching when Shego found and went up to Kim's room...and fell asleep on her bed...and Kim's mom tucking her in.
Awaiting your next update. |
 immortal7 2007-04-04 . chapter 1i hope you post soon i like the first chapter |
 creativetoo 2007-03-30 . chapter 1I was wondering, as I started reading this, that it wasn't the same as I'd saved before.
Revised...doy.
Great rewrite and I'm looking forward to seeing the rest of this story. |
 DreamingOfMyGirl 2007-03-27 . chapter 3hehe... much cute ness, I kinda of glad you didn't turn the vampire bit into one of those erotic fics... but hey *shrugs* whatever works to get rid of the muse.
~dreamer |
 crimsonshrouds 2007-03-26 . chapter 3I like vampires and your story is really good.
Cant wait for your next chapter.
And good reference to Hellsing. |
 Squeaky Phantom 2007-03-26 . chapter 3Nice story. I like it. Can't Wait to read more so please update soon. |