A great story. Very good.

that was so cute. i loved it and i kinda want to cry.

This was good and it makes me wonder - will we see some tension now when Gibbs does come back? Will Tony be angry with him? Part of me really hopes they go that route.

Nice.

aww nice, some good observations and it really sounded like Tony was thinking those exact thoughts! anymore?

Great story. You've captured Tony in my opinion perfectly. He wants Gibbs back, but he also wants to punch his lights out at the same time. I look forward to more of your fics.

Love,

Lynn
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That sounds like Tony. Very plausible story there. Good job.

Perfect. I have no other words to describe it.

Unlike others, though, I don't think you should continue it. Leave it as it is. To have Gibbs call from Mexico or to add someone else's POV would dilute this. It's lovely just as it is.

Thanks -- it's where I've always thought Tony's head would be.

Great. Really great

That was awesome. I loved the way you were able to convey the depth of Tony's emotion, as well as the conflicting feelings, worrying about Gibbs whilst not wanting to worry about Gibbs, and the vacilation between independance and abandonment.

I would love to see you do more with this .. maybe a Gibbs POV or a phone call from Mexico .. I must admit I can't believe Gibbs would just walk and leave his people to it .. its not in his nature.

If you don't wish to continue this, I hope you'll write more NCIS.

WOW! I'm blown away. Exceptional writing! Really, this was well written and I think it is exactly how Tony feels about Gibbs' departure.

This is brilliant!! I too love NCIS and was completely in shock (and tears) after the season finale. What a great way to put some of Tony's thoughts to words!! excellent job!!

Oh my gosh. Great story! I love it. Love the part about Sam Spade and The Maltese Falcon. Keep up the good work!

That was awesome. Great last line. Great entirely, really. I think you captured his emotions really well.

This was fantastic. You completely got into Tony's head in this piece. He has such a complicated relationship with Gibbs, and you're right - Gibbs' opinion always did matter more than Tony's father's opinion. I loved it. I love Tony-centric fics in the first place, and one like this, exploring how he's going to deal with Gibbs being gone...Awesome. I'm looking forward to seeing more from you, and adding you to my faves.