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Reviews for: Kage Hitoshirenu
Nebelkind
2009-02-14 . chapter 2
Please update soon!
I want to see what happens next! ^^
Hangman1
2009-02-07 . chapter 2
Katsu means explosion... Cool... You should really continue this story, it's really good!
Knoxy Love
2007-08-09 . chapter 1
Okay let me just say this story has so much potential it leaks it into storys near it, BUT it appears you have no real plot, its bascilly not even a naruto fanfic, kyuubi is a fox, one second kyuubi's inside him, the next he gets a sword named fenrir, itachi attacks naruto loses an arm and doesnt even care, your charectors are flat and unapealing to the reader and the plot holes are like gaping chasm's, BUT like i said it has potential, all you have to do is, re write it, give more detail and depth to charecters not just hey random char #1 your now a main char, oh now after five minuetes your dead, naruto lost an arm, now kyuubi no KITSUNE is a wolf, makes no sense, this is not a flame just helping you out.
itachisgurl93
2007-03-24 . chapter 2
plz update soon
cursed chaos kitsune Kyuusune
2006-10-26 . chapter 1
Wait... your name means storm coffin...
WTF?

(sorry couldent resist the randomness good story anyway)
IceDragonLover
2006-08-15 . chapter 1
i hope that you will continue with this story and i like were this is going. Hope you will update soon
Hunter Hatake and Neko Uchiha
2006-08-02 . chapter 1
this great stoey pleaz write more soon
conlan0414863
2006-08-02 . chapter 1
keep on typing
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