Cute~

that waz awesome!

THIS IS -CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISM-, not flaming. (:

No offense, but this doesn't really make sense and it's kind of written poorly... okay, it's REALLY written poorly. Seriously, two Avatars? Such a quick relationship? None of it is realistic in the Avatar Universe or the real world. Only /some/. I'd advice you to go through and grammar/spelling/punctuation check the whole thing... it might make a good plot after that.

Anyways, best of luck.

~Galaxi

? How can there be 2 Avatars in the world? Plz explain!

Yes can you please Place an "m" rated story.

good story

Ok... I'm sorry but that kinda sucked. I'm Sorry! SORRY! S-O-R-R-Y!

WOW :o

I loved It!

Kataang 4 ever!

I'd like to see the sex scene. ;D

Sweet!! Another Avatar!! Cool. I really anjoyed your story!! I cant wait til the sequel!

Where where where where?!! SUspense!! Where's Sokka!!

Wow...cool past with Katara and whoa for the whole wanting to do it thing

wait isn't the avatar supposed to be in the next nation?
but it went great with the story I loved it

awsome