 OreoFudge'D 2009-02-27 . chapter 1i've read a lot stories with the same plot, but this is one of the best. :D |
 Tobi Tortue 2007-05-20 . chapter 1Damn. Such a waste for a good pilot to go down in a motorbike accident. Seems like an attempt at suicide. Terribly adorable, and sweet, but a little far-fetched. |
 excelentofe 2006-11-30 . chapter 1how sad =( |
 crimson gates of paradise 2006-08-09 . chapter 1WA
It's just me, Jess. Es is at a trainstation :P
Finally, I review you once again!
Man, one year of silence, perhaps even longer.
I decided it had been long enough, and read your new story just for the sake of it. (Ask a random Dutch person if (s)he ever heard of Gundam SEED and the average answer will be: 'Wha?').
So, how have you been? Have you been missing my (our) big-ass reviews? You should have >.>.
Anyway, I'm gonna review this story now. We^^
I have to say, I've seen better. Perhaps because this is very short (for your standards) and it's very romantic. (I'm used to more than just romance when it comes to your stories, and I don't find nothing else but romance in a story appealing.)
Also, the boy -Athrun-, came across as if he was comitting suicide, and something tells me that was not the thing you were going for ^^". (please don't shoot me T__T)
All in all, your writing style is refreshing, and it forced me to keep reading. So you may take that as a compliment.
Love,
Jessica
P.S. YOU STOLE ESTHER'S TRADEMARK! :O (not that I care :p)
P.P.S. Please update NOTV! I liked faith too, but...I REALLY wanna know the end to NOTV. I've been waiting for over a year (and others have been waiting for a much longer time).
I hope that beta of yours will kick your arse if you don't get on it soon. :D
Just...keep in touch. Mail/msn/AIM/whatevah.
or...or I'll...I'll Kumagoro Beam you! :) |
 abcdzyxw 2006-08-08 . chapter 1well written fic... but its sad =( mybe you could make a sequel? hehe *wishful thinking*
your story is similar w/ the story i heard a few years ago but in that story, it just shows the part where the guy gave his helmet to the girl. and the story really didn't mention any name..
hope i could read more from you! |
 evilbrownie 2006-08-03 . chapter 1^^ Aw... I think I heard a similar chain message before which was like this.
But of course, I like the asucaga version way better. |
 Storms-winter 2006-08-02 . chapter 1WAAHH! I beta-ed it and it still made tears come! I love it! Keep going! lol, mucho welcomes Carms!
Storm |
 Cari-Akira 2006-08-02 . chapter 1OMG! THAT WAS SO SAD!... but~! i havta say... very well-written... geez... that was.. so sweet... and sad... i liked the part where they stopped... i thought... ahh... ye... sad... mann... and touching... good story! hope you write more soon!! looking forward to your future stories! xD |
 SlvrSoleAlchmst1 2006-08-02 . chapter 1AH!
That scream was performed out loud, I'll have you know.
Oh my fucking god, I love this story. I LOVE this story. I... *chokes* Oh my god. KUSO! It was so, it was so... KYA! You know me! I leave long reviews, but I can't this time, I just can't! You've left me speechless! I have to read this again. I HAVE TO! It's going on my favorites list, in my C2, it's going to be pasted up on my wall. Oh my fucking god, WHY AM I FLIPPING OUT SO MUCH?! Something struck a chord for sure. This story... *squeals and cries and bawls and sniffles and wails* AH
I don't care if you don't usually write canon couples. This was absolutely perfect. Now please, don't dissappear again into a little hole of zero fanfiction! You're too good for that! |
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