 Twister of the Mind 2008-03-13 . chapter 1great story, excellent job! |
 Lora Perry 2007-03-11 . chapter 1so basically, this story is amazing.
A) Lorne whump, -because really, who could ask for more?
B) The fact that he has relaiazed that Sheppard's team is never good for resucue. (wonderful, loved the way he laughed when he realized he wasn't with the Sheppard team)
Does Winchester the soilder have anything to do with Sam or Dean of the show Supernatural?
Do you plan to write anymore Lorne whump stories! ('cause they will be read. :) |
 Splitbeak 2006-08-15 . chapter 1Huh, I've actually never read a Lorne fic, but this was pretty good. Very well written. |
 BizzyLizzy 2006-08-04 . chapter 1Loved it, especially as it was from Lorne's POV. |
 CMDragonia 2006-08-03 . chapter 1I love Lorne stories (I've written 2), but I've never done whump. That was really good, I enjoyed reading it. |
 Reefgirl 2006-08-03 . chapter 1Great fic, I love Lorne stories |
 ChiaraHhue 2006-08-02 . chapter 1Exellent Lorne fic! Very well written - you gave us great insights into the type of man he is and how much he cares for his team. Hope you plan on writing more! |
 DesiGal 2006-08-02 . chapter 1Yay! Lorne fic! Me loves it! I enjoyed this a lot, nice look at a team we don't usually get to see. Bravo. |